Just some crap that I'm gonna update at some point, wanted some feedback.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More WIPage

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More WIPage

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Me likes whatever you call that on the top of the the staff. :P Nice and shiny.

his face looks terrible. the only thing that is good about this is the sphere or orb or whatever on the staff. Other than that i consider this mediocre at best.

dam, looks pretty nice so far, can't wait to see how the finish product will look like.

niiiice. i admire ur ARTwork---its not cheap and cartoony like most pixels i see. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

suggestions:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. change the layout (its very boring right now, everything is parallel and equally spaced)

 

 

 

2. i dunno what overall effect youre going for, but maybe change the shading a bit. its good that youre using different colors to shade, but right now the contrast between the shades and the original color is too great imo.

I guess the whole 'WIPage' thing didn't clue some of you into the fact that this is indeed a work in progress. I don't want to be rude or disregaurd your crits, but you'll have to understand that this is a piece of art thats still being 'shaped' and worked on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks.