himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 here i spent like 10-15 minutes, I am suprised as this is my first time actually trying to draw a picture, I have tried b4 but they looked like noob things. After the sixth one I quit. Please post how I should add color and stuff and what to add for the background. Also give cc and rate please. ( I have used the pencil tool this entire time, no using the line or cirlce tool. I created this all on my own and no one else has helped me.) ------------------------------- Origanol ------------------------------- Bow added, leg shortened. ------------------------------- Hair, nose, eyes, and part of a tree added I need help with the mouth and please help with the nose. ------------------------------- Color added except for background and skin (someone post skin color plz). ------------------------------- Chanegd to a man, beard made, arrow added (rune) ------------------------------- Skin added!! (pretty much final touch, please rate). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socrates Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 actualy very good erm the bk ground maybe a forest. Thanks to Jopie for this great signature.99 Slayer|Fishing|Summoning|Hitpoints|Attack|Strength|Defence|Fletching.Anyone at Manchester University PM me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 Very good, your proportions all make sense. Your lineart is neet and good as well. His left arm should be full extended ahead of him holding the bow, maybe shorten the left leg a bit. From what I can see, it was worth trying over and over till you got to that. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 the pose is a bit off, If your going for kneeling ranger with arrow drawn in bow, you don;t have the body twisted the right pose for tht postion is shown in my sig. If its a diff pose my bad juts ur missing arm and bow makes it hard to tell Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Author Share Posted December 4, 2005 Holy crap, I got a good rating for a legend! *cough*misterxman*cough* Hmm, I have no clue what ur talking aout with the body being twist, Ill try to shorten the left leg. I didnt realy try it over and over, I started with the right calf and went down to the shoe then made a quick crappy shoe and went back up the made the entire leg then the left leg then the body and arm, etc... After that i redrew the right shoe because it was too small. and btw what do u think about the wrinkles on the left leg, I can seem to get the right =[. Ill start trying to make a forest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 what I mean is your guys body seems to be facing the wrong way for the pose your going for. So what I've done is I've put the basic stickman of ur pose on and taken the ranger from my sig (whihc is in pose I think u going for) and dun his stickamn If you look I think the difference is quite obvious: Still looking nice for a first try and all tht fainting about mxm giving u rating not gd thing to post, it kind of gives you a noob-like appearence which doesn't bode well with some of the respected people around this board Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Author Share Posted December 4, 2005 hmm, lets think about what u just posted... 1. I am a noob pretty much (not to be confused with newb). 2. Im not trying to get it so its a pose for a picture, more of a pose of real life hunting type picture. I am not going for the pose u think I am but thanks for the suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 hmm, lets think about what u just posted... 1. I am a noob pretty much (not to be confused with newb). 2. Im not trying to get it so its a pose for a picture, more of a pose of real life hunting type picture. I am not going for the pose u think I am but thanks for the suggestion. the only 'picture' pose part of what i did was the head looking towards the camera if you had the bow drawn kneeling and face the way the bow is tht is hunting pose Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Author Share Posted December 4, 2005 just nvm, u dont get it :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 to be brutal, if your guy is meant to have his bow drawn ready to fire in that pose he is gonna completely miss or break some ribs when he fires Trust me I have dun archery lessons in realife Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 here i spent like 10-15 minutes, I am suprised as this is my first time actually trying to draw a picture, I have tried b4 but they looked like noob things. After the sixth one I quit. Please post how I should add color and stuff and what to add for the background. Also give cc and rate please. ( I have used the pencil tool this entire time, no using the line or cirlce tool. I created this all on my own and no one else has helped me.) don't listen to pawclaw... i like the way the head is atm... if you wanted it from the side you need three angles... paw only has 2 I can't post an image right this second but ill be back later to post one... whats wrong with his head is that he is trying to make it look from the side but put the face straight on... you need the side of the head included New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 here i spent like 10-15 minutes, I am suprised as this is my first time actually trying to draw a picture, I have tried b4 but they looked like noob things. After the sixth one I quit. Please post how I should add color and stuff and what to add for the background. Also give cc and rate please. ( I have used the pencil tool this entire time, no using the line or cirlce tool. I created this all on my own and no one else has helped me.) don't listen to pawclaw... i like the way the head is atm... if you wanted it from the side you need three angles... paw only has 2 I can't post an image right this second but ill be back later to post one... whats wrong with his head is that he is trying to make it look from the side but put the face straight on... you need the side of the head included I didn't tell him to do anything to the head, I was talking about the body. He was commenting on mine being a picture psoe and I juts said that mine was only a picture psoe because my guy was looking at the 'camera' instead of at his target Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Author Share Posted December 4, 2005 Exactly paw, how the hell would some ribs get broken? I have taken archery lessons also.. this isnt meant to be perfectly real life its just for a sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 4, 2005 Author Share Posted December 4, 2005 I need help with the motuh and please help with the nose! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 5, 2005 Author Share Posted December 5, 2005 I added color to the clothes and I think it look tons better.. tell me what u think: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted December 5, 2005 Share Posted December 5, 2005 Ok paw sry i thought you said reajust the head... :? looking ever better now that the colors are added! goo shadeing too New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 5, 2005 Author Share Posted December 5, 2005 Thank you, Im not reajusting anything with the body unless I ask, like I need help with the head! Thanks for the shading rating, thats one of my best talents. *edit* I might just make it a man.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 5, 2005 Author Share Posted December 5, 2005 Bump (how come I never get a higher post count?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronnie_kloet Posted December 5, 2005 Share Posted December 5, 2005 Nice man! I kinda like it! 6.5/10 (Logicaly, coz ive seen much better i know that your not pixeling so long ) GL man with the pixel :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 6, 2005 Author Share Posted December 6, 2005 Thanks, im probably gonna make another guy or two and put them in one sig.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted December 6, 2005 Share Posted December 6, 2005 looking nice, now that other arm is in I can see the pose is right. sorry bout b4 thouhgt u were going for a slight diff pose Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 6, 2005 Author Share Posted December 6, 2005 Thanks for trying to correct me paw, I should have put in the other arm b4 putting it here. Can someone help me with that stupid nose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
himy_name_is Posted December 7, 2005 Author Share Posted December 7, 2005 Please elp me tweak it and rate it please!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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