This is my first sig that i ever done. :( idk how it is, some tips would be nice. Rate if you want.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no shading at all and its 2d

Wow... you really didn't help him or add absolutely anything to the topic...

 

 

 

Don't be discouraged by bad criticism, it's not a bad first try, it helps to be an artist in rl, this way you know how shading and what not works, but i'll help you improve.

 

 

 

-As mentioned, take a little more time to shade, and make it look realistic.

 

 

 

-You need to remake the eyes, unless he's meant to look like hit got hit in tha nads... lol that was a joke, no offense

 

 

 

- Work on your poses, his arms seem inproportionate and out of place, but that wasn't a good first pose, it was a pretty hard one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Although I know you were trying to get better, I wouldn't reccomend posting your 'first' sig, try making the next few by yourself, try self improvements, and read the sticky on tutorials for pixeling. Not a bad first attempt, but you need some work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

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no shading at all: work on shading

 

 

 

2d: work on the 3d perspective.

 

 

 

there that better?

perspective is 3d as from above.

 

 

 

3dimensional illusion is accomplished on a 2d screen by shading. As it shows the lights sources and intensitys of relfecltions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On to the sig

 

 

 

Perspective is off

 

 

 

in that perspective it would be looking from above and the chair would be hardly at an angle much different than 180 degrees (or 0 for that matter)

 

 

 

arms are weird

 

 

 

no shoulders

 

 

 

proportions are wrong (google a quick article on the human anatomy)

 

 

 

Such as armspan is approx = height, arm falls about 4-5 inches above the knee standing

 

 

 

Legs are in an awquard postion (you try that one)

 

 

 

torso is in the shape of a capsule? (looks like my ibuprofen tablets)

 

 

 

Sand is too yellow

 

 

 

Perspective on bag is off too

 

 

 

Eyes dont fit the picture

 

 

 

Head not in porportion to the body

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

whew there im done....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep practicing :wink:

nice.... 8)

quite flat.... you need to shade and draw so that you can see the roundness of the arms and legs... the chest looks like a dough boy... make him a tad more skinny... thats about all... :?

its ok, but ur in no rush to finish a sig, take sum time in ur sigs next time.

This is my first sig that i ever done. :( idk how it is, some tips would be nice. Rate if you want.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I think everyone has noticed he is very flat due to no shading, use other peoples work as examples for things like shading and colours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also the lower half of his leg is out of proportion and your character has no thumb (like cats) MEOW!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For a first time this is very good. On my first pixel everything went very wrong, I overshaded my helmet and put no shading on all other stuff.

unless it's gone high tide all of the sudden i can't image someone would sit so close to the water :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

try a different perspective and put some shape into.. everything.

 

 

 

buy a how to draw atanomy book, it helps.'

 

 

 

practice gets you banana's