MASTINO Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 how can i amke it better... :? ? 991th to 99 mage 9\6\06 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plya Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 the shading of the hill changes colour not sutl eneugh u can see te lines and the head is 2 wide like a melon the tree and legs . Visit TipRs for Rs Tips such as Money Making Guides Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DutchKing Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 He stands on a whip :roll: change that.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_shadow Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 ill probably end up sounding harsh but i dont mean to :wink: ok 1st- The rune guy looks like he is standing up - his head would almost be level with the main char. the proportion with the tree/main char/hills seems off... either the hill is very small, the tree is very small... or the chars are verry big. thats because the shading behind the main char is the wrong shape - it would follow the shape of the land, instead of being in a straight line... also.. with the right leg (our left) the yellow patch that goes over the knee is in the wrong spot.. the foot is facing forwards, so the knee guard/whatever should be centered.. The shading on the bg could be improved, and added to the tree. the coloud needs more detail as well.. you could also make the head less rounded, by removing some of the side pieces of the helmet, so that the sides of the helmet are straighter The detail on the main char and the rune guy is pretty good :wink: you might find it would look even better with slight dithering, or more colour shades. overall, its still a pretty good pixel :) like i said.. might seem like im being harsh, and if it does, sorry.. Featuring in my sig: TURT, ma pet turdle! Thanks to- Runemetsa and Aijiru for two of the great sigs!Avatar made by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 dont copy punkages leg and foot style? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilertay Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 He must have a fro to occupy all that space under his helmet :P [Admin Edit: Religious text Not permitted]~108 combat~5.9k dusties killed / dragon chain :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 ofcourse he has a fro just like all those other super all those hip, jazzy, super cool, neat groovy cats. It's in the fridge, daddy-o. Are you hip to the jive? Can you dig what I'm layin' down? I knew that you could. Slide me some skin, soul brother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MASTINO Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 dont copy punkages leg and foot style? ....? a lot of ppl use that foot style..... :? and i know its not good but im getting better....(i think :? ) 991th to 99 mage 9\6\06 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MASTINO Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 ill probably end up sounding harsh but i dont mean to :wink: ok 1st- The rune guy looks like he is standing up - his head would almost be level with the main char. the proportion with the tree/main char/hills seems off... either the hill is very small, the tree is very small... or the chars are verry big. thats because the shading behind the main char is the wrong shape - it would follow the shape of the land, instead of being in a straight line... also.. with the right leg (our left) the yellow patch that goes over the knee is in the wrong spot.. the foot is facing forwards, so the knee guard/whatever should be centered.. The shading on the bg could be improved, and added to the tree. the coloud needs more detail as well.. you could also make the head less rounded, by removing some of the side pieces of the helmet, so that the sides of the helmet are straighter The detail on the main char and the rune guy is pretty good :wink: you might find it would look even better with slight dithering, or more colour shades. overall, its still a pretty good pixel :) like i said.. might seem like im being harsh, and if it does, sorry.. thx il try :P 991th to 99 mage 9\6\06 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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