erifeon Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 Hi all erifeon here (rntothehills in game) and just to say about the new machinima i am creating called elite noob adventures. Please watch criticise and say if you think iIshould continue to create this machinima:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCXFT-_0dYo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naraku893 Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 isnt that like tehnoobshow or whatever the 12 year old players watch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saxon Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 Hey, Are you a nerd? if so, that would explain a lot. + Saxon is right :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erifeon Posted February 16, 2011 Author Share Posted February 16, 2011 Hey, Are you a nerd? if so, that would explain a lot.erm the good type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erifeon Posted February 16, 2011 Author Share Posted February 16, 2011 d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylpheed Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 You definitely should NOT make any more of these. That voice was just...terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wiv Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 Why it was bad:1. seems like u were just making it up as u went along.2. u just recorded it while u played so we could hear ur clicks and breathing.3. it was obvious u were voicing the second person due to lack of voice change.4. voices were horrible attempts at stereotype voices5. seems like you did this out of boredom and wasn't funny just came off as annoying.6. it felt like i was watching my little brother play runescape and he was just talking random stuff cuz he was bored. tips to make better:1. make a script, pre plan what u are going to do for ur show2. get voice actors or practice better voices3. give a background story, dont just throw us in the middle of his adventure4. have some people pre-screen/review it before posting on you-tube, this video is a little embarrassing if you ask me. that's all i can think of for now. I'm not an expert and by all means i would never attempt to make a video but this is just my opinion on your video. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erifeon Posted February 17, 2011 Author Share Posted February 17, 2011 You definitely should NOT make any more of these. That voice was just...terrible.Thanks dude for the criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erifeon Posted February 17, 2011 Author Share Posted February 17, 2011 Why it was bad:1. seems like u were just making it up as u went along.2. u just recorded it while u played so we could hear ur clicks and breathing.3. it was obvious u were voicing the second person due to lack of voice change.4. voices were horrible attempts at stereotype voices5. seems like you did this out of boredom and wasn't funny just came off as annoying.6. it felt like i was watching my little brother play runescape and he was just talking random stuff cuz he was bored. tips to make better:1. make a script, pre plan what u are going to do for ur show2. get voice actors or practice better voices3. give a background story, dont just throw us in the middle of his adventure4. have some people pre-screen/review it before posting on you-tube, this video is a little embarrassing if you ask me. that's all i can think of for now. I'm not an expert and by all means i would never attempt to make a video but this is just my opinion on your video. I will do what you said and try to create better videos in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wingless Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 17 minutes of watching you kill Black Knights with a very silly voice is not funny. At all. I switched it off after about 30 seconds. Try to create a plot, don't just go with it. Pre-record lines, etc. Use different font than the one you're using now, because it makes you look like a direct copy of Tehnoobshow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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