There it is, my first pixel avatar. Took a little while, practiced a bit more dithering, pretty pleased with it. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah so whadya think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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her arms r a bit thin and they r weridly posed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and th 'sword' blade is too big comapred to handle, and a blade tht big looks more 2h than 1h

umm I'm gonna redraw some, should help explain why the pose looks wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the sword's just meant to be big. :wink:

explain why the pose looks wrong.

she looks like she has her legs bent and her butt sticking out but also leaning forward, if you know what I mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its very nice, btw ;)

 

explain why the pose looks wrong.

she looks like she has her legs bent and her butt sticking out but also leaning forward, if you know what I mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its very nice, btw ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have to ask why have u pulled a random bit of what he said out of context so it has a different meaning?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He said he is going to redraw some whihc should help explian why the pose looks wrong

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He didn't ask explina why the pose looks wrong?

Sorry for trying to help, next time I won't bother :roll:

Ok, started trying to make the pose look better, but now I'm going to watch Simpsons.

Add borders on the 4 sides.

 

 

 

About the linework, it's pretty much what Paw_Claw said.

 

 

 

BTW, Paw_Claw, why don't you give nicer C/C, and respect other posters?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really like the colors you used and the shading :)

 

 

 

Overall, looks good.

I wasn't being disrespectful or rude or anything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was nice c/c, granted I didn't say anything tht nice bout it juts the crits but I am very tired from 5 hours of art exam (lame excuses rule!), but tht is true

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and as for the other bit I wasn't trying to be rude, i just thought it was a bit foolish to pull part out of a post for a quote when u take it out of context and give it a new meaning. Nothing wrong with what he said, I just was cofused as to y quote a part taken out of context

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway does look very nice, makes me want to get bk to my current pixel but after 5 hours of art exam i am void of creativness (just another 5 hours to go)

The pose looks fine to me, maybe the but is a little bit too big but it just looks like her legs are slightly bent at a fighting pose, maybe add some details to the skirt and lower the right arm a bit to better show that.

i just thought it was a bit foolish to pull part out of a post for a quote when u take it out of context and give it a new meaning

Yea, but its fun!

 

 

 

art exam...void of creativness

See? [/spam]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Umm...good luck...making? Umm sure, that works ;)

Guys stop trying to kill each other. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for cc btw. :P More up tomorrow hopefully.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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