Please rate and give CC. Be harsh but not to harsh since this is my 2nd. I've already done my third (in media market) im just finishing this one off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the sheild looks a tad small. other than that good

it looks good, just maybe add some otehr stuff. I like the toned down shading ;)

His pose seems to be a bit stiff?

His pose seems to be a bit stiff?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yes - He seems very robot-like :?:

he needs the following

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ear

 

 

 

eyebrow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

work on your line work on paper....you can't run before you learnt to walk.

His arms are a bit small in comparison to his legs as with the sheild.

 

 

 

He has no hand as i am sure u are aware.

His arms are a bit small in comparison to his legs as with the sheild.

 

 

 

He has no hand as i am sure u are aware.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

isn't it obvious that he is going to draw it...later?

 

His pose seems to be a bit stiff?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yes - He seems very robot-like :?:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^agreed

Right now im just learning the basic kind of stuff about pixels and im experimenting a little, but yes i agree about the pose. I'll work on poses when i'm a bit more confident with the rest of the stuff. And yes i'm aware oof the ears, eye brows and hand. I do agree that the shield is a tad small. I'm not going to worry about facial stuff as i'm creating a helm that ill put on him. Thanks for the CC aswell. :D

Right now im just learning the basic kind of stuff about pixels and im experimenting a little, but yes i agree about the pose. I'll work on poses when i'm a bit more confident with the rest of the stuff. And yes i'm aware oof the ears, eye brows and hand. I do agree that the shield is a tad small. I'm not going to worry about facial stuff as i'm creating a helm that ill put on him. Thanks for the CC aswell. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i reccomend learning to draw before you learn how to pixel...it will help you ALOT with anatomy and detail

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

right now, you sig lacks the following

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shading (gradients dont make good shading)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Detail (well.. it just not detailed)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Action (i understand it is a wip...but still his pose is just....he CANT be attakcing or defending or anything in that pose)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A good pose (line tool=your enemy)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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