http://www.tip.it/runescape/index.php?rs2quest_id=177

 

At point 2 in the guide there is: "For me the story was:" Should be changed to: "One way to tell the story is:" (or something like that). Although I am not sure if it can be different because I came with the exact same story without looking at it first (tried some other directions always to be eaten).

 

At point 5 & 6 at Suggested it should state "none" As it does at other parts of the guide.

 

At point 5 this should be removed: "If you want to know what else he drops look at his entry in the bestiary by clicking here." There are already multiple links in the guide.

 

At point 5 it doesn't include that he can heal himself (while it does in the tip and tricks section) that should be added.

 

Sorry if using the word "should" sounds demanding, please tell me if I could better use an other word.

Everything has been fixed. Thanks so much essiw! :thumbup:

And "should" doesn't sound demanding to me :P we appreciate the submissions.