http://www.tip.it/runescape/index.php?rs2quest_id=113

 

Part 4 describes how to repair the trousers but it should be added to the trousers part above it (as like now it does seem like you could repair them yourself and you are going to the next part) Also I think it could be reworded to say part 4 first and then tells you how to get those items.

Also at part 4 it says "She will tell you to wait a few minutes and then come back to her. Wait a little and return to Oronwen and get your trousers." Which seems a little double to me and she tells you to wait a minute (not a few).

 

 

Then at part 4 it tells you to buy 1 of each dye, except if your shooting skill lacks. That is misleading because I thought my shooting skills don't lack. So when I shot the colours at the sheep (and did it good) the sheep moved away after shooting (not my fault or lacking imo). So it should be reworded that it is not as confusing as it is now.

 

Before step 12 it says that you require coal (perhaps 20). Well "perhaps" doesn't tell you anything, I am not quite sure what it should be changed in but perhaps doesn't sound right.

I have reorganized the clothing repair section and added some text per your suggestions.

Also, I changed "perhaps" to "approximately" as the coal used varies around that value from player to player based on the way the fractionalizing still behaves. Thanks so much! You've been credited. :thumbup: