well im making this for teenage's comp, and i want ur input on it. how can i improve on this? what to add in the sig? rate it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BTW: if anyone steals this u die :twisted:

I use blue on my lineworks! 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kay um... how about adding branches to the tree.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You know, make it look less like a paddle? :|

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and the roots seem a bit "chunky" if you know what I mean.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Characters looks awesome, but I dont get the look of the hands on the bottom left and right.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yep.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*wanders off*

the hat from the right person looks wierd...

 

 

 

and the sunbeams at most right of sun, left of tree arent like

 

 

 

the left beams at hat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rest is cool, cant w8 to see the result :wink:

cool thanks for tips :)

107 views and only 2 comments on it? is it that bad? :cry: :oops:

114 views :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if you finish it, alot more ppl will reply, and youll get more and more comment. :wink: :mrgreen:

The roots dont seem to to be in perspective, try squashing the semi circle of the top a bit more. (if ya get what I mean?)

it's good linework, but not very interesting atm...

it's good linework, but not very interesting atm...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes i know, thats why i made this topic so if people had any ideas on what to add to make it more detailed

A table of foods (like lobs/sharks) and mugs of beers? Since I can sense the two brothers are happy. ;)

Since I can sense the two brothers are happy. ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thought it was bf and gf oh well no matter...good linework so dar tho ur style will turn out well with this

how about someone swingin the axe in the tree in the background, or a pile of logs next to them or something.

Are they holding beer mugs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cuz I think I just figured it out just now... :lol:

Are they holding beer mugs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cuz I think I just figured it out just now... :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

em yea they are, i gotta fix that :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and thanks for ideas, i think ima add the logs on the ground :)

 

Are they holding beer mugs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cuz I think I just figured it out just now... :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

em yea they are, i gotta fix that :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and thanks for ideas, i think ima add the logs on the ground :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see lol! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So yea idk if you're still taking ideas and wutnot, but the background still kinda looks a bit empty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And as it seems that the two brothers are drunk, maybe you could add like a "tavern or a bar" in the background just before the mountains.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A drunk guy passing out in the grass would be fun too! :wink:

 

 

Are they holding beer mugs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cuz I think I just figured it out just now... :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

em yea they are, i gotta fix that :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and thanks for ideas, i think ima add the logs on the ground :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see lol! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So yea idk if you're still taking ideas and wutnot, but the background still kinda looks a bit empty.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And as it seems that the two brothers are drunk, maybe you could add like a "tavern or a bar" in the background just before the mountains.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A drunk guy passing out in the grass would be fun too! :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

haha really nice ideas, but i *THINK* he only wants him and his friend to be in the sig. really ncie ideas though

That is both guys right? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm getting slightly confused. Lol.

yes they are 2 guys :lol:

Maybe you could post a bit more update of the sig? :wink:

i will later tonight. ive been playing some RS with clan mates, then watching parkour vids. then tip.it boards. THEN that awesome korean vid, now this. so im yet to do more on the sig :oops:

Lol I still insist a table of foods and beers/cocktail would be nice. :lol: