here it is again:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i added a graveyard :D, some variations of stars, fixed the moon, and shaded the characters and the ground . . . ya i been bizy :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

plz giv more advice and be as harsh as u want :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jav

dude wheres the pick?

lol soz :lol: here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i thought i was missin something sry :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jav

cool not bad but abit 2 simple

You really dont need a water mark that big, I can't see it well enough to give you CC.

here it is with less red :? sry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jav

dude get rid of the water mark, just put your name on it in a corner. If someone realy would want to steal it, they would. Doesn't matter how much red you put on it. All it's doing is make it so it's very hard for us to give some crtisim when all we see is a bunch of red everywhere...

cant u possibly c around it? :roll: there is like nothing there and im usin pure paint so i cant write anything!! plz give as much crtique as u can c lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jav

looks very plain atm, the characters are good but could use more shading, add some mountains or hills in the back to make it more interesting.. 5/10 cus the characters are nifty

Usually the ground gets darker further away, try changing that see if it looks better.