jav Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 here it is again: i added a graveyard :D, some variations of stars, fixed the moon, and shaded the characters and the ground . . . ya i been bizy :) plz giv more advice and be as harsh as u want :wink: jav "Let your feelings be like that of a monkey in a pinata, hiding inside with the candy hoping that the kids don't break through with the stick." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plya Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 dude wheres the pick? Visit TipRs for Rs Tips such as Money Making Guides Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jav Posted January 21, 2006 Author Share Posted January 21, 2006 lol soz :lol: here it is: i thought i was missin something sry :? jav "Let your feelings be like that of a monkey in a pinata, hiding inside with the candy hoping that the kids don't break through with the stick." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plya Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 cool not bad but abit 2 simple Visit TipRs for Rs Tips such as Money Making Guides Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 You really dont need a water mark that big, I can't see it well enough to give you CC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jav Posted January 21, 2006 Author Share Posted January 21, 2006 here it is with less red :? sry jav "Let your feelings be like that of a monkey in a pinata, hiding inside with the candy hoping that the kids don't break through with the stick." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 dude get rid of the water mark, just put your name on it in a corner. If someone realy would want to steal it, they would. Doesn't matter how much red you put on it. All it's doing is make it so it's very hard for us to give some crtisim when all we see is a bunch of red everywhere... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jav Posted January 22, 2006 Author Share Posted January 22, 2006 cant u possibly c around it? :roll: there is like nothing there and im usin pure paint so i cant write anything!! plz give as much crtique as u can c lol jav "Let your feelings be like that of a monkey in a pinata, hiding inside with the candy hoping that the kids don't break through with the stick." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 looks very plain atm, the characters are good but could use more shading, add some mountains or hills in the back to make it more interesting.. 5/10 cus the characters are nifty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 Usually the ground gets darker further away, try changing that see if it looks better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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