Bounty of the Hunt - A draft

This is a draft of an action scene that I wrote mostly as practice, since I seem to have trouble writing those. There's no real storyline, just a group of hunters capturing and killing a large animal.

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Bounty of the Hunt

With a grunt of exertion, Thivas pulled himself up the cliff. His palms left two bloody smears, the result of dozens of small cuts and scratches caused by the razor-sharp rocks. As he waited for the rest of his group to catch up with him, he scanned the valley beyond. On the other side of the ridge lay a verdant world completely different from the sun blasted mountains behind them. The long grass rippled lightly in the wind as far as the eyes could see, interrupted only by the wide river that drifted lazily through the emerald sea. A few thin columns of smoke rose up in the distance. Humans, the only thing keeping ThivasÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ people from moving in permanently.

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