MrMumboJumbo Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 I need some opinions about these signatures I made or am working on. 1. Here's one that I'm currently working on. It's not done yet, but I like the character a lot so far. Do you think this is coming along well? If I continue with the same quality of shading, how much do you think it will be worth? 2. This was a quick 45 minute job. I just want to see if the shape of the character looks good. So....does the shape look decent? If you'd like to buy, check out my Media Market topics. 3. I began this for my first competition, but I got bored / lazy and stopped working on it. One day, I decided to finish it, so I want to see how good you think this is. So, do you think it looks good? If you'd like to buy, check out my Media Market topics. Yeah...sorry for all these questions, but I need a new non-RuneScape, computer-related hobby (this used to be buddy-making, but that got boring) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdprs Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 1 and 3rd are good, 2nds a little plain And some problems: the long is oddly shaped in the 1st one, shold look like this: And theres too much brown trim on the 3rd kite... http://jdpr.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMumboJumbo Posted February 22, 2006 Author Share Posted February 22, 2006 Okay, I'm f2p so I didn't know. I just figured that members would be willing to pay more, so i made it with members items. I'll fix that next time I work on it. And I only planned to sell 2 for 50k, so I didn't want to spend more than 1 hour on it. I remade it. Does it look more like a dragon long now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecljpse Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 kites need to be bigger at their size they'd be practically serving as gloves... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 The 1st one is great, but the foot looks a little wierd and the legs are mishapen. Is he lifting his leg to pee? :lol: The 2nd one looks like you traced it from a rs char, and the lines need to be cleaned. His knee caps are also facing basically the oposite way, which isn't really a comfy position. (try keeping your legs together with the kneecaps facing oposite direction :? ) The view on the character is basicaly directly staring at him, and the ground takes the entire scene. Theres no sky, which makes it look like hes standing on a hill. The 3rd one Looks 2d, the ground is lumpy and the sky is shaded. :? You need to add shadows cast by the characters. ;) http://spriteart.com/pixeltutorial.html -- This is an extremly good tutorial, you should look through some of the lessons in there. It explains shading and light directions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 Hmm. In the first one, you should keep the white splots. And make it snowing.. I could see that working with it. ;P It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upyouraxe Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 kites are bigger than a 1x1 ft grid lol :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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