Gingi Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 I wasn't allowed to post the first bit. But i think this is a lot better. I will keep adding to it. Tell me what you think please Kidu ran up to the doors and knocked again. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅCome in!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Lost Someone? Someone else might know them. Ask here. The Missing Person List! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giordano Posted February 27, 2006 Share Posted February 27, 2006 *looks at title, then at my avatar then reads story* ....... "The cry of the poor is not always just, but if you never hear it you'll never know what justice is." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted March 15, 2006 Share Posted March 15, 2006 intresting but too dialouge based, it gets kinda tedious. EDIT: Oops sorry for bumping an old topic. maybe you could continue it? Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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