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[Trojann2]

Well, there's gunna be a mage\whip hybrid, with loads of castle wars tix stacked in a corner, Tell me what you think of the little parts i have done...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BTW, what do you people think about the window? i added it in right away so that i could get it looking right...And im gunna shade the bricks ALOT MORE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: Also, how should i alter the side of the wall so it's not so straight... :x

[chessmastuh]

It's actually pretty good, for a start. If you felt like it, you could probably enter some comps out there in media market.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For the window, you might wanna give it bars, if you want it to go along with the walls. That or a wooden frame around it. But I like what you've done with the general shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Somethings off about the right hand wall... I just can't put my finger on it.

[Trojann2]

It's actually pretty good, for a start. If you felt like it, you could probably enter some comps out there in media market.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For the window, you might wanna give it bars, if you want it to go along with the walls. That or a wooden frame around it. But I like what you've done with the general shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Somethings off about the right hand wall... I just can't put my finger on it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yea, i can't see what's wrong with the right wall too, i think the poportion is off compared to the left wall...