My first pixel sig -done

[tenseiken]

This is my first ever pixel sig. please tell me what you think so far. i'll update as i go along

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

suggestions will be considered, but probably not used, as i have a pretty good idea of what i want to do with the rest of it. i.e. the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

finished product:

 

 

 

[Lowgravity]

Looking good for a first and the shading (or however much you have done so far) and the anatomy is pretty nice and it just has a overall nice look, i'll help you out a bit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Extend the t-shirt on his left shoulder, leave the part going forward and make it wider towards his back and higher towards his neck.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Make the pickaxe handle + pick-part of it alot bigger, an enlargement of about 2x or something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think that's it for now, good luck :D .

[himy_name_is]

Its good for a first.. The gem is way too round.

 

 

 

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  it loks like and egg kinda.
   
   
   
  his left leg is bigger than his right (thickness in the thighs).
   
   
   
  Also the rocks seem too round.. make them more jagged and stuff.
   
   
   
  His left arm is short.
   
   
   
  Small eyes,
   
   
   
  end of pick handle (not the hand side) is too small of a circle.
   
   
   
  Glove on hand looks wierd and puffy.
   
   
   
  Only 4 fingers on the hand with the egg?
   
   
   
  nose is too flat unless its broken
   
   
   
  

 

 

 

I love the party hat..

[Jdprs]

The only things that really bother me is the pickaxe(the head of it doesnt look right) And his one arm is too short, its pretty good though, really good if it is your first, good luck with the rest of it post updates

[tenseiken]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it loks like and egg kinda. <--it's an uncut gem

 

 

 

his left leg is bigger than his right (thickness in the thighs).<--wont look that way with color or shading

 

 

 

Also the rocks seem too round.. make them more jagged and stuff.<--good suggestion, but i kinda like the way they are. the cracks are enough

 

 

 

His left arm is short.<--not anymore, fixed with suggestion above yours

 

 

 

Small eyes,<--might change

 

 

 

end of pick handle (not the hand side) is too small of a circle.<--also fixed from above suggestion

 

 

 

Glove on hand looks wierd and puffy.<--i like it. it gives emphasis on the hand, it says 'look what i'm holding'

 

 

 

Only 4 fingers on the hand with the egg?<--it's a cartoon :)

 

 

 

nose is too flat unless its <--if i change it, it will look broken

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks for the input though!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: redid pickaxe, added boot, recolored clothes, reshaded phat, shaded head and hair, moved left arm for longer effect.

[Jdprs]

His arm is still too short(the one clostest to your view, and the pickaxe still doesnt look right, stop justifying yourself and fix it

[tenseiken]

i'll justify meself if i wish, and i am editing, but i dont see anything wrong with the pickaxe, or the arm anymore.

[Jdprs]

Whatever then...If you dont want to listen to anyone then i dont care

[tenseiken]

lol, buddy, i'm listening to people. read my first post, suggestions will be taken into consideration.

 

 

 

i've made several changes due to things that 2 people have said.

[Nadril]

lol, buddy, i'm listening to people. read my first post, suggestions will be taken into consideration.

 

 

 

i've made several changes due to things that 2 people have said.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but probably not used

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:? ...

[tenseiken]

good, you caught that word! maybe they'll realize now why i'm shooting things down.

[tenseiken]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edited: Eye-made bigger, added handle to pickaxe, made legs into dragon legs.

[Jdprs]

Well if you dont want segestions why are you posting your sig, when its a wip.... Just to hear people tell you its good?

[tenseiken]

gah, i didnt say i didnt want them, i just said that i might not use them. learn to read please. i want to hear what people think of it. whether they think it's good or bad, or anywhere in between.

[Godslayer]

Its good for a first.. The gem is way too round.

 

 

 

• 
   
   
   
  it loks like and egg kinda.
   
   
   
  his left leg is bigger than his right (thickness in the thighs).
   
   
   
  Also the rocks seem too round.. make them more jagged and stuff.
   
   
   
  His left arm is short.
   
   
   
  Small eyes,
   
   
   
  end of pick handle (not the hand side) is too small of a circle.
   
   
   
  Glove on hand looks wierd and puffy.
   
   
   
  Only 4 fingers on the hand with the egg?
   
   
   
  nose is too flat unless its broken
   
   
   
  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My critique too. Fix them.

[tenseiken]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edits:rocks jagged, 5th finger, pick axe tip, nose, added cape of legends, made the gem less smooth, made right leg bigger to match left leg, made glove less 'puffy'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok, now i need some suggestions for what i should put as his shirt.

[Jdprs]

The edits are an improvment and im glad you made them, good to take advice from other pixels, but the pickaxe still isnt right, It should look more like this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats a pickaxe head from a sig of mine just for an example, anyway for the top, maybe make dragon chain, or if you just want it a tee shirt like that add some rinkles and shading

[tenseiken]

i'm not sure what i want to do with it, i know if i leave it as a t-shirt, i'd add shading, but then there's the question of color. i'll try a dragon chain, see if i can get the texture right or not.

[tenseiken]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the final product. i'll probably keep making minor adjustments on it.

[Jdprs]

Looks now, great for a 1st, good job

[tenseiken]

a major adjustment: got rid of all black lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also worked on the background a little.

[MASTINO]

looks cool but i dont realy like the face