Commissioned linework for a friend.

[magictv]

i'm about to give him some tips on the linework *scandal* :roll:

 

 

 

very nice linework, mayube draw some curtains curled up though a bit like the diagram below if you see what i mean. also you could make it more obvious they were playing a game and put one of the controlers on the sofa and also I think if the controllers had leads it would look better too.

 

 

 

 

 

!------------------!

! \              / !

!  !           !   !

!  !           !   !

! /              \ !

!------------------!

! \              / !

!   !          !   !

!    \        /    !

!     \      /     !

!------------------!

 

 

 

on the whole very good.

 

 

 

and to the people who have been going crazy abuot it calm down, just because you're a strong christian or offended by the sig doesn't mean he isn't allowed to make it or look for C/C

[jak722]

Yea the controllers are too small, I admit... :lol:

 

 

 

I wanted to put in some curtains but I doubt my friend knows how to make it semi-transparent.

 

 

 

 

 

Oh and thanks alot red! Means alot to me. :D

[Despaxes]

Cuz frankly, the first title I made was just mirroring the fact that the guy in the sig beat jesus in a game and jesus cant believe it.

 

 

 

Have me banned or give me a new title. Period.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OHHHHHH

 

 

 

 

 

the contorllers need to be bigger, an have cords...cuz i didnt get that at all....and jesus look evil :shock: