I decided to make a topic promoting my Work in progress. I've never actually used C/C from people while making a signature, so hopefully this increases it overall.

 

 

 

Here it is;

 

 

 

 

 

Anything I can improve on? I think the jeans are a bit better, but I'm still not sure. Also, the shirt might be a bit off.

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks guys!

The first one is the newest one, right?

 

 

 

You're right, the jeans look awesome. Problem I see is that his forearms are big and thick and brawny, but his bicep area and shoulders and torso are skinny. Either bulk him up (definitely make his shoulders wider than his abdomen), or thin down those arms. Thinner forearms might make wrists apparent, too.

 

 

 

Better than I could do, anyway :wink:

Yeah, the bottom one was the last one.

 

 

 

I'll try thinning down the forearms and see what I get. ;D Thanks for the comments.

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Better?

 

 

 

Looking good after you fixed the arms. ^_^ I think the little ball on the end of the Santa Hat should be a little bigger. :D This looks like a cool sig. I can't wait to see it finished!

;D Cool dude. It's gonna be a great signature, methinks.

 

 

 

 

 

I'm just making sure you all can tell he's holding an open wound. If not, what do you guys suggests?

i like it but i think that u shud add some fold on the clothes

i like it but i think that u shud add some fold on the clothes

 

 

 

 

 

Good call.

 

 

 

Some changes which will be made on my next edit:

 

 

 

Make the blood look better.

 

Shirt is ripped where he was stabbed.

 

Add some folds to his shirt.

 

Work on the other guy.