April 26, 200620 yr edit. You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
April 26, 200620 yr its plain...but it draws my eye i especially like the moon 7/10 because it so plain keep it up Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board!
April 26, 200620 yr Wow that is really slow at loading... o_O How big is it? It says (Not cached) and I'm pretty sure it's gonna be big. But yeh, what's done so far is ok, you need to add more though. Too much empty space and not enough action (Despite it being a 'night-time' scene, it still needs something else to focus on, other than the man leaning against a tree.) Also, the shadow isn't in the right place... Imagine you had a bright lamp on your desk, and you held a pen up on the desk in the same position to the lamp, that the tree is to the moon. Plus the man doesn't have a shadow...
April 26, 200620 yr Wow! 148 KB (150.642 bytes)! Big one! Now I know what it took some time... But, you could improve the tree and the grass shading and move the shadow to the right place, also change a bit the sky. ~komodo
April 26, 200620 yr Author dosen't look big to me.... You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
April 27, 200620 yr Author fixed up some things You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
April 28, 200620 yr Author bumpbers You can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isn't any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write "(bleep) you" right under your nose. Try it sometime. I think, even, if I ever die, and they stick me in a cemetery, and I have a tombstone and all, it'll say "Holden Caulfield" on it, and then what year I was born and what year I died, and then right under that it'll say "(bleep) you."
April 28, 200620 yr Not big as in vision, big as in content size. The shadow on #2 should start at the floor, not on the side of the tree.
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