500*300 pixel canvas - deserted ruins

[pjb21]

just wanted to show you all something ive been workin on recently.

 

 

 

background:

 

 

 

 

forground:

 

 

 

 

ive done alot to it, but i still feel that something is missing to it, suggestions welcome.

 

 

 

CC, comments, etc welcome. no flaming tho.

 

 

 

Please rate, but bare in mind its not 100% finished.

 

 

 

PJB21

[rooneyrules0]

Nice, but I think what it's missing is people, because in most pixels, they are the center of attention

[pjb21]

i does have people, but i want concentration more on the bg, ill post them, but they arent some of my latest work and dont reflect my lastest styles exectly...

 

 

 

PJB21

[rooneyrules0]

ah yes sorry, the foreground picture didn't load. Sorry.

[toppdawg]

Yeah, I think you should try working on your anatomy a little more, there is a lot lacking in the facial features of the people. I love the background you've made, but the people need a lot of work.

[pjb21]

Yeah, I think you should try working on your anatomy a little more, there is a lot lacking in the facial features of the people. I love the background you've made, but the people need a lot of work.

 

 

 

as i said in a previous post, te forground is old work, and doesnt reflect where i am currently, my anatomy has improved =)

[_k0m0d0_]

Merge them, its easier to rate :D

 

But they are nice, really nice! ^^

 

 

 

~komodo

[remoteman]

i like it, cool style. the mace on the end of the flail is massive though, it would weigh a tonne :shock:

[pjb21]

more weight - more momentum - more damage ^^

 

 

 

i would combine them, and i have, but they dont fit that well together, perspective is different, and the forground blocks out half of the bg.

 

 

 

thanks for the comments, keep them comming.

 

 

 

PJB21