darkness11 Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Thanks for reading my play, if you havnt read any of my others, do so now! and remember to crit!! Darky goes to war: http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=38991 darky goes to war vol #2: http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=39070 darky gets drunk: http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=39909 Darkness11 stars as Mrs doolittle and ? co- stars as the evesdropper! if you can find out who ? is you get a cookie! Enjoy, dont forget to crit... Chapter I - The evesdropper Mrs doolittle, is enjoying the company of some chickens, and the farmdog, 'what great conversations' she thinks.... But then suddenly, an evesdropper attempts to hide thereself in a pathetic attempt to be a wall!! Mrs doolittle is shocked! So our Heroin gathers up the little courage she has, and confronts the evesdropper! The evesdropper trys to sound more like a wall thinking wall thoughts! Mrs. Doolittle isnt satisfied! she examins the wall further... No response this time, the evesdropper is trying a different approach to be unseen! Mrs doolittle's courage is boosted and she orders the evesdropper with her inner-ordering voice Suddenly the evesdropper uses the chance to change locations while our Heroins back is turned! The evesdropper attempts to camoflage itself! But thanks to Mrs. Doolittles animal-speaking- to ability, she knows that is no dog! but a very scary person! She runs over to a knight in addy and introduces herself. Another sound from the evesdropper... Suddenly, in a flash, our evesdropper reveals itself!! Our heroin gathers up her strength and strikes with her powerful dagger! (arguably best weapon in the game) She is much to fast on her toes for our heroin! But on her feet... We shall See!! Chapter II - The Chase Our heroin runs swiftly! bolting the doors closed behind her as she goes! and laughs happily as she has out-witted our enemy!! *Exciting chase music* But the evesdropper jumps out from behind a tree and continues the chase!! But our heroins energy is low... and she struggles to continue!! Shes getting closer to the evesdroppers clutches!! Atlast! an oppurtunity! She entangles her foe in the crouds of person-traffic and cries for help! Noone Responds fast enough as The evesdropper begins to catch up! As the Evesdropper speeds up, she claims her pray! Suddenly, Mrs. Doolittle stops, and her inner-courage erupts like a flame, she challenges the evesdropper! and they are teleported by Guthix to the arena!! Chapter III - The Showdown Our heroin shows no fear! As the battle starts, Mrs Doolittle strikes at the enemy! But the attack is countered! Mrs. Doolittle has a great idea! she whips out her bow and gathers some distance Our heroin uses the oppurtunity to turn the tables, but it isnt long till her enemy catches up and evens the odds! She stuns her foe with an arrow and gather some distance......... However, her arch-enemy's speed brings her face to face once again, and with an arrow, brings her foe to 1hp!!! And with One final shot.... She wipes the floor with her opponent! showing her whos the boss!! The end "Remember kids, dont mess with my animals!" -Mrs. Doolittle, 2004 Thanks for reading my story/play I hope you enjoyed it! me and ? had a great time doing it!! Critz please! -Darky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luvey Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 :lol: Love your new story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragosh Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 i wasnt gonna look at it... but then i did, and i lmao-ed for about 3 minutes :) nice story :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_counda Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 nice...your a godo writer, and I'm looking forward to the next story :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawaiiGopher Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 that is a hilarious story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness11 Posted August 14, 2004 Author Share Posted August 14, 2004 *bows* thanks everyone, its worth the time just for good comments :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peaceblaze Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Good job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runesmithie Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 Darkness11 stars as Mrs doolittle and ? co- stars as the evesdropper! if you can find out who ? is you get a cookie! I'm putting bets on.... I dunno... you? I just posted something! ^_^ to the terrorist...er... kirbybeam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w4ldrange Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 And what happened then? Moore.... WE WANT MOORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runesmithie Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Why is this in the library board? Oh well, we give people reason to visit the library board! I just posted something! ^_^ to the terrorist...er... kirbybeam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeldafreek Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Heh, that was pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beefaz Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 wow :) great story :) i want you to continue it too :) $ for surfingplay and win $!$ for a banner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbl3z Posted October 22, 2004 Share Posted October 22, 2004 ah-hahaha that's one funni comic strip! u gunna me more? was funniiiii LoL :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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