June 9, 200620 yr Its weekend, finally :) So I went back to my computer, and tried to make a pixel. this is what it ended up like, I kinda like it so ill use it for a few weeks (unless theres a big mistake i didnt saw yet.) Note: the thing hes holding in his left hand is a pallet(t)e, for his paint. And I still need some more ideas for the text animation, that isnt good :) [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 9, 200620 yr read some human anatomy book or website... add some form of shapes are curve to it, not some marshmellow guy.
June 9, 200620 yr Author yea, I thought it was ok at first, now i see a squared person... thanks :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 9, 200620 yr Its pretty good but the guys back is very square. Other than that, good work. -Bloodangel "Unfortunately, the real world isn't the same as a fairy tale."
June 9, 200620 yr I can't see any shading... Try putting some creases in the shirt, obviously, the above posts. And a few other small things that don't look right... Forgotten what they are now... =|
June 9, 200620 yr I can't see any shading... Copy and paste into paint, and zoom in on 8x. The top has 3 different reds shaded. That's basically it. ̢̢̮ââ¬Ã¢Ã¢ââ¬Ã
June 9, 200620 yr Not everyone is going to be saving that avatar and zooming in on x8 are they? You need to be able to see it with the naked eye (Lawl immature moment - naked! pfft!), not with a bloody magnifying glass like an old lady.
June 9, 200620 yr Author I can't see any shading... Copy and paste into paint, and zoom in on 8x. The top has 3 different reds shaded. That's basically it. Ripper! :o ok, theres hardly any shading... but I did shade where I could The Floor, his back, thats about it... [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 9, 200620 yr Not everyone is going to be saving that avatar and zooming in on x8 are they? You need to be able to see it with the naked eye (Lawl immature moment - naked! pfft!), not with a bloody magnifying glass like an old lady. Ripper! :o Erm.. not quite lol. I just copy and paste into paint not save. Just so I can get a feel of other peoples styles etc. not to copy, and definately not steal. Now, I've just got to go sell this avatar on Ebay, so toodle-do! ̢̢̮ââ¬Ã¢Ã¢ââ¬Ã
June 9, 200620 yr Author Not everyone is going to be saving that avatar and zooming in on x8 are they? You need to be able to see it with the naked eye (Lawl immature moment - naked! pfft!), not with a bloody magnifying glass like an old lady. Ripper! :o Erm.. not quite lol. I just copy and paste into paint not save. Just so I can get a feel of other peoples styles etc. not to copy, and definately not steal. Now, I've just got to go sell this avatar on Ebay, so toodle-do!no I was kidding, I did that too :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 9, 200620 yr Oh good, glad to see I'm not the "weirdo" here lol :mrgreen: ̢̢̮ââ¬Ã¢Ã¢ââ¬Ã
June 9, 200620 yr I reccomend you try a sig or avvy without the black lines... It gives it a much more realistic view... NO PURE BLACK AT ALL... Pure black pretty much doesn't exist... Not to our eyes anyway... Doubtful you will ever see pure black... Pure black has NO Light reflecting at all... and on earth there is ALWAYS light... No matter how small or little... There is ALWAYS light... [/ramblings] Try it with that one, maybe? You can add some definition to the wall... That's not what a wall looks like... you could use shading on that definitely... The floor isn't that good for shading... Try the no black thing, with dark brown for the seperation. =)
June 9, 200620 yr Perhaps I could give you some advice on the shading. Try to shade in 1 direction. Perhaps if you see what I mean with this picture:
June 9, 200620 yr He said it himself... There is no shading except the shirt... The bit on the floor I really can't pick out... No point trying to tell him he's shading wrong if there is none. :lol: owned? EDIT: I see it now. but it all follows the same rule: The window is the light source (sun) ... there's no different directions... Still owned.
June 9, 200620 yr Author yea but I wasnt like: hey, i cant see shading, lets shade the wall! :roll: that would end up horrible anyway... Timo, what do you meen with the three green lines bottom left? thanks for helping me yall :) [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
June 9, 200620 yr Gallery sig project thing (You really should help with that if Alduron doesn't close the shop down [ :( ] ) ... Try something like that... Or the current one...
June 9, 200620 yr Nice so far, just needs some shading. Even just making one wall slightly darker than the other will put a sense of space and 3Dness. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art
June 9, 200620 yr Author thanks mxm and gold, suddenly I realised what is wrong with the walls. Ill make another avatar, when ive got a good idea for one, and then start all over with your comments in mind. Thanks to the rest, yall helped me alot. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
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