Jekyll and Hyde

[Sejr068]

Part One : The Dedication

 

 

 

We all know of the random event known as Jekyll and Hyde. You say to yourself, "Did this really happen?" or, "What the heck?". There is a play also called Jekyll and Hyde. Some may have seen it. This is my play. My story, my legend.

 

 

 

Felonc̮̩̉̉ was in love. Madam Broomshire was in love as well. They were getting married. Today was their engagement party. Felonc̮̩̉̉ was no where to be found. Sir Prysin walked towards Madam Broomshire, and tried to start a conversation.

 

"Hello, Madam. Where is Felonc̮̩̉̉?" He said politely.

 

"He said he would be coming soon. Not to worry, my dear," she replied gracefully.

 

Felonc̮̩̉̉'s friend, George, was anxious to know where he was as well. After two tedious hours of waiting, Felonc̮̩̉̉ ran through the door, as if he had seen a ghost.

 

"Felonc̮̩̉̉, what could be more important than your own engagement party?" George had asked after walking with Felonc̮̩̉̉ into the court yard.

 

"George, I'm the brink of an amazing discovery. Something astounding! Finally a light at the end of the tunnel has come to me. 'Tis only a matter of time."

 

"What do you mean?" George asked, nervously.

 

"I am on the verge of perfecting a formula that could forever seperate good from evil in every man. We could become famous and declare world peace George!" Felonc̮̩̉̉ whispered excitedly.

 

"You know of course, you must test your theories. That will require permission. Sir Prysin will probably not allow it." George said discouragingly.

 

"We'll see, George."

 

"Come on, your bride is waiting!" George said as he pushed Felonc̮̩̉̉ into the main ball room of the Broomshire Estate. Felonc̮̩̉̉ heard Sir Prysin talking to Madam Broomshire, looking very sad and serious, so he stepped in. When Felonc̮̩̉̉ walked in on them, he heard Sir Prysin finish talking, "Come with me, and save yourself." Felonc̮̩̉̉ made his way into the conversation.

 

"Prysin, enough. There is no more, you have little room to be talking. You have had chance after chance to date the ones you love, yet you push it all aside. You are too late." Felonc̮̩̉̉ said, then looking at Jane.

 

 

 

Character Key:

 

Jane / Madam Broomshire : Felonc̮̩̉̉'s soon to be wife.

 

Felonc̮̩̉̉ : A scientist with a plan.

 

George : One of Felonc̮̩̉̉'s most trusted friends.

 

Sir Prysin : A young knight looking for a future.

 

 

 

Part two is coming soon.

[sirith_knight]

This is actually very well written for someone who has one post. Is this actually going to be set up like a play? (Having pretty much the entire story set by text rather than decriptions). Seems like it would be very interesting to get that kind of story going in the library.

[dragoncmd]

^^^

 

what he said

 

 

 

sits pretty good, though I'll hold my review until after I read the orginal story first.

[Death45]

i'd rate it a 7/10 beacause usually stories should be well story-like

[dragoncmd]

death, what do you mean this isn't story like, this is just an intro. make your criticism constructive please.

[Death45]

Okay but i am just saying normally strories that have intros are usualy followed by a first chapter if not an entire story, i mean an intro by itself is useless and a useless intro is basically useless.

[Kiriyama]

Death Give him time

 

 

 

 

 

AND LEARN TO SPELL ZAMORAK!

[dragoncmd]

Death Give him time

 

 

 

 

 

AND LEARN TO SPELL ZAMORAK!

 

zamorak is not in this story so far.