QuietHeroin Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 This is the second installment of my first pixelated image. I think it's coming along nicely, perhaps I'll get some more coloring done today. Anyways. Stats: 100 % MSpaint. No tracing. Reference photo that was really big. Constructive criticism welcome. QH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemad11 Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 not bad . .his face is a bit deformed on his left side . .sorta strange . .nice shading though. . i know faces are hard ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 color looks good , but face is messed up. But its really good still, finish it though, dont submit it every little step. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuietHeroin Posted August 21, 2004 Author Share Posted August 21, 2004 I shrunk the reference to the same size so you could see... Btw: I didn't mean to submit "Every little step" Just three in total..... The entire face and neck is a pretty big step, and I needed a bit of help. QH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 I shrunk the reference to the same size so you could see... Btw: I didn't mean to submit "Every little step" Just three in total..... The entire face and neck is a pretty big step, and I needed a bit of help. QH. yea just edit the post when your done, dont make new post. Looks btw, again. Make it into a sig when your done with it, look cool :wink: Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kilner69 Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 The shadow fits with the perspective on the JPEG, and the one thing you haven't managed to capture on the pixel is the perspective. :wink: The overall shading on him should make him seem as if he was turned slightly to the right, instead of head on. Aside from that, however, Nice clea lineart, but the shadow on the neck should be slightly lighter, so as not to make the dithering obvious. Widen his jaw/chin, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuietHeroin Posted August 21, 2004 Author Share Posted August 21, 2004 Points well made, and I agree with all of them. The neck is missing the last shade of dither, and the perspective is, yes, Off. Didn't think anyone would notice, but :D . I had drawn the Lineart with the missing facial turn, and didn't notice until I had finished the rest of the lineart. Anyways, yes I shall see what I can do to mend. QH. PS: That's what all comments should be like. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syre Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 awesome! I love guns n roses! his face is a lil wrong thou... but it's really good... i have all the albums except greatest hits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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