NO! Black outlines = nooby. See, it's better to create your own style, and I think yours is better anyways. Few small crits: The shading you've done on it rocks, but, have you ever heard of dithering? It really helps with transition, and clears up the jagged edges that come with using contrasting colours. For example: In my example (my really bad one), dithering is shown on the left, and... umm... non-dithering on the right. You can (hopefully) see how dithering can be useful. Lose the PS font, also. Pixel is done by hand, and the text that goes with pixel should follow that rule. :wink: Oh, and lighten her lip. Anyways, that's the best first attempt *ever* in my eyes. GJ. :)