Please give me pointers on how to improve my skills.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here its is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would like to thank: Jumister5889, Misterxman, Eev, Unknownmasterofnothing & Lowgravity for all their help on my 1st Post 'Pixel HELP'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cheers

5/10 only 'cause it has no shape. Keep working and you'll get good.

looks weird, hes kinda flobby lol.... make the legs straighter, they look weird, and make his helm face foward

ok mexe tks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and snapper (cant remember ya forum name) what ya mean he has no shape??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i know hes a little wide... buts hes my 1st 1 :?

It looks alrite, needs alot of shading though, looks really flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And tell your guy to lay off the Big Macs. Haha.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hamilton smells.

ok mexe tks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and snapper (cant remember ya forum name) what ya mean he has no shape??

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i know hes a little wide... buts hes my 1st 1 :?

 

 

 

Didn't mean it like that man. I was just saying take more time. My pixels aren't very good but naturally I'm not an artist. I take time with them though. Maybe one day they'll be good like some of the people on the forums. Work longer on your pixels. Sorry for being so rude.

weapon should be bigger, person should be thinner with longer legs ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

work on the shading too

Seems *quite* outta proportion, seeing him being, well, short and fat, while his arms seem boneless...

no probs snapper i need constructive critizem (cant spell) i know guy looks totaly wacked up :P

anyother ideas??/

actually lmao irl