Mr_Greens Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 ok im making a new signature and this is the start. its going to be animated but i want some feedback on my ahrims guy so far. Ok after some feedback i got i fixed his hump ok i made the arms longer fixed the book i dont know how to make pages gave him an ammy shaded and made my own face also fixed the staff so it does not have so many right angles. This is done on ms paint im new at this kind of stuff for some it might take 5 mins to make for me almost 2 hours :3> i know it does not have shadows or anything but im still learning where and how to place em. ------ i started my animation i duno what the hell went wrong here but just to keep ya updated. this is 2 slides i wanted to make sure they would work befor i did anymore as you can tell something messed up but im done for tonite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deloriagod Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 -The staff has too many right angles -The robes need to show folds -The arms look short and stubby -The book looks odd because it seems to be slightly open (But with no pages inside) -The face just seems odd.. Internet Marketing For Newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_Greens Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 -The staff has too many right angles -The robes need to show folds -The arms look short and stubby -The book looks odd because it seems to be slightly open (But with no pages inside) -The face just seems odd.. i know im still working on how to make the folds. ill make the arms longer =) emm and i cant add pages to the book unless i make it bigger will work on those thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 I suggest you draw out the human shape then add the robes later. The robes look really not natural at all. wait a minute....... Did you just edit a little on that Ahrim picture from the RS manual and enlarge it? look too much alike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_Greens Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 I suggest you draw out the human shape then add the robes later. The robes look really not natural at all. wait a minute....... Did you just edit a little on that Ahrim picture from the RS manual and enlarge it? look too much alike no i drew it myself from scratch i did look at the ahrims guy from the rs site a few times to get a look on what ahrims looks like.. EX the top of the staff but i did use the face off the rs 1 but i plan to change that after everything else is done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 jagex makes bad graphics..... follow them is a big mistake, draw your own Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_Greens Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 its all mine but the face only because i want to get the robes etc done befor i worry about the face incase i have to change anything. and i never really drew anything with details befor so this is what i have i can see what i want in my head but i just have not learned how to put it on the computer yet :wall: but i see what you mean the stance looks alike but my plan is to have him raise the staff casting a guthix spell so thats why i chose to have him like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 clean up the lines..and work on making it less..lumpy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_Greens Posted July 4, 2006 Author Share Posted July 4, 2006 ok well i fixed some of the things hope it looks better to others not just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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