Please remember this is my first attempt in making a banner

 

 

 

So give me some comments and how can i improve!

its not working

i think this was it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i rate it 3/10..it's kinda simple...but good start...

 

 

 

the background was empty...maybe u can make the lighting flash or put some bg make the words smaller and focus more on graphic

 

 

 

just my opinion

ok thanks...as it was my first banner made..

 

 

 

ill try to improve for my 2nd one

a 4 cuz it has animation :P

3/10 for me cuz its too big.

ill give you a 10/10 if you tell me what your using to make the animation!!!otherwise your at a 1/10 to me :twisted:

also the letters color looks weird...did u use imageready or movies 13 or what did u use?

Not bad for a starting sig, but u can't use it here.

 

 

 

It's 2 big. Limits are 300x150 x 30kb . U'r exceeding 2 of them.