This is going to be a multi-chaptered short story, which i will hopefully be adding on to. I accept constructive critisism but please, no insults.

 

 

 

Chapter one

 

Alas, there once was a noble warrior named Melodia. Now Melodia was average as can be, and she never expected to come across anything extraordinary. One day, she got out of bed and ate her breakfast. She put on her armor, and packed her bag, for she was to set out on an adventure looking for a quest. She walked from town to town looking for a quest, when she came along a man in a spot of trouble. Melodia approached him and asked, ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅGood day sir, my name is Melodia. You look like you need some help. What might be the matter?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

:-k hmm interesting i tink..... \ wanting more

:o yay! my first reply :D i will add more, it just may take a while lol

OFFTOPIC:

 

 

 

oh! oh! u said tink!!!!!!!! i love that word

 

 

 

ONTOPIC: i will start working on next chapter soon

ONTOPIC: i will start working on next chapter soon

 

ooh well i been waiting for sometime now and probaly osme others when will it be done?

You get to the point too fast :P We need time to relate to the character, to know what type of person she is. Slow it down, plan it out, and it will be much more enjoyable for us :P

 

 

 

Naturally if this is to be a short story then you're doing fine. We only need the basic outline. Looking forward to more.

yeah, the first and second chapters are more of an intro, it will get more detailed. i have been gone for a while and need to get back to work on the second chapter... its almost done..

 

 

 

its kinda gonna be a short-medium story if that makes sense

i also am editing some parts of the first chapter