i dont think this is better than the first 1 i made but yeah

 

 

 

if u could write

 

 

 

Suggestions on how to improve:

 

 

 

rating out of 0/10

 

 

 

what sigs better 1) or 2)

 

 

 

1)

 

 

 

 

 

 

2)

2 is better cuz.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

brown ground looks cooler.

 

 

 

with axe the char looks way better and i like the dark letters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rating 4 nr1:

 

 

 

6/10

nice pictures. I can never get the hang of detailed backgrounds, cus they never really go well with the characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nicely done they are in lovely positions I agree that number 2 is better for the same reasons and a tip is when drawing detail further away keep zooming out to normal view to see if it looks how u want it to before you finish. neway lovely.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6/10

lol the first ones mountains look like theyre taking a puff after having to much to eat and the character doesnt look good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

definitly second one