September 3, 200619 yr Well, it took two and a half days to finish. Not sure if I am completely done. Still trying to figure out how I can add more detail, suggestions would be helpful. Anyway, comments, critisism, all welcome.
September 3, 200619 yr Everything is a bit dark...like the blue mask and rune armour...and the wall on the right is just...well... #-o ... http://www.boom
September 3, 200619 yr The wall on the right looks fine to me. The rune is too dark as is the mask, though I do like darker sigs. The biggest problem that I can see is that the people are in profile which makes for a boring and flat looking sig. Also the cape isn't flying out realistically nor is the whip.
September 3, 200619 yr Everything is a bit dark...like the blue mask and rune armour...and the wall on the right is just...well... #-o ... How often do you pixel? i have seen you give a horrible sig a 10/10 and then you say that the right wall is bad?? Dude there isn't another way to do that right wall... in my opinion this is a very nice piece of work both in shadeing and also in angles... Only a few things i can say to work on, the table looks a bit iffy... but im not sure if you could do it any other way... And the monks black blob? mustach? black hole to another demention!? :shock: or just a mouth gone wrong.. whatever it is it needs cleaning up lol you might want to highlight edges of the book on the table where the light from the candles would hit it... if the room is so dark then wouldn't it cast more of a glow? overall though, its a very nice sig... :D New sigzor^^
September 3, 200619 yr It looks to me like the table is angled differently to the wall. Whether you did that on purpose or not, it makes it look bad. Also I just noticed the seats aren't in the same percpective as the walls and table as well. Great job on the windows and walls though, really good, I like the hue shift shading.
September 4, 200619 yr Author yes that is supposed to be a mouth lol. Thanks for the comments everyone. I messed up originaly making everything at the right angles, and didnt notice till I had gotten pretty far, so I really didn't feel like doing it over. I tried to make some adjustments but it wouldnt work. Once, again, thanks for the comments (and I dont see how the right wall is messed up either #-o )
Create an account or sign in to comment