September 16, 200619 yr I dream, And I wish, Oh how I dream to fly like a little bird, Oh how I wish to ride on the air, But I am bound to the ground, For just a fleeting moment I feel myself depart, Depart this dreary ground on which I'm bound, I'm away from here, Far far away, No more to stay near, And it is my wish to someday fly away, Fly away like a little bird some day, Far far from here. ~bacab We don't rebel to sell it just suits us well, we're the bright young things.
October 8, 200619 yr I GUESS I WILL RATE THIS POEM AS A POEM OF HOPE ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!!
October 8, 200619 yr I dream, And I wish, Oh how I dream to fly like a little bird, Oh how I wish to ride on the air, RIDE ON THE AIR DOES NOT FIT... "RIDE" But I am bound to the ground, For just a fleeting moment I feel myself depart, Depart this dreary ground on which I'm bound, I'm away from here, Far far away, No more to stay near, And it is my wish to someday fly away, Fly away like a little bird some day, Far far from here. A LITTLE REVISING HERE WILL DO...ITS NOT BAD BUT ITS NOT GOOD EITHER ~bacab ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!!
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