well jsut tell me how i could improve and rate

 

 

 

Its very nice for a first try in animation. the actual animation part is good, its very smooth and works nice, just working on the graphical part now is all you need :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but the animation alone, good job :D

whys there pink stuff coming out of his neck. The sig overall is plain. I think you spelleds oops wrong.

nice just crop it b4 u post 8)

I am confused and afraid.

whys there pink stuff coming out of his neck. The sig overall is plain. I think you spelleds oops wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

remember the gore rule, i think that mam123 tryed to keep by it, did you mam? well it would look cool with like a big blood splatter :lol:, pity it banned :x , well kool smooth animation. u use 30 fps? but anyway its too big :(