issy2 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HARRYPOTT614 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 lol nice chapters u got there very romantic :3> you a natural at it huh :?: by da way ur proofreading rocks, thx! ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted October 16, 2006 Author Share Posted October 16, 2006 thankyou. I actually really enjoy editing, proofreading, so spread the word! Lol. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HARRYPOTT614 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 is that a true story? meh hehehehe ok i will spread da word and maybe see ya in runescape 8-) ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted October 16, 2006 Author Share Posted October 16, 2006 is that a true story? meh hehehehe ok i will spread da word and maybe see ya in runescape 8-) Umm some bits are true...not all though. And please switch 'cabbage' for a ruder word beginning with 's'. The censor switched it lol... :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HARRYPOTT614 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 *thinks,"what is a word beginning with an 's',"* *searches the dictonary* nothing found... *searches the internet* ah! found it...how rude.... 8-) :thumbsup: ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted October 16, 2006 Author Share Posted October 16, 2006 *thinks,"what is a word beginning with an 's',"* *searches the dictonary* nothing found... *searches the internet* ah! found it...how rude.... 8-) :thumbsup: Lol um. Let's switch the subject eh...what was ya favourite bit? Least favourite? Which bits need editing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HARRYPOTT614 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 um..ok.. lets see.... your a nutral! lol tries again...hmmm well all i can tell you is that its good but you can make it bigger by putting in some detail...and for a story like that...you have to think of a title..there is no way that story can be untitled.... k i will think of something else laterz all in all your story is "showing keen interest in writing" :XD: ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HARRYPOTT614 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 good grammer (accept for a little here and there) a good beginning and ending to the chapters you can make the chapters bigger but the rest is good ~!RuNeScApE rUlEs!~!!!ChAoS wIlL rULl fOr EvEr!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted October 16, 2006 Author Share Posted October 16, 2006 Yeah I know lol, chapters 1-3 are too short. But I can't think what to add lol. Any ideas? :-k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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