Astralinre Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 Well, I just got finished making this. The render was in Bryce and I touched it up in Photoshop. My first question is this: should I use this as my new sig? Secondly, I'd like some good C/C on it. Tell me what I did well, what needs work, what looks cool, and what sucks. I know the line art could use some work, but I've never been very good at that. ~Astra "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Awskid Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 7/10, the text could be improved a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arthu Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 I like the shapes. Text on down left looks too blurry. Great sig, you should use it. :) 99+ all 23rd March 2012 - 2496 total 13th June 2012.9000+ dragon drops! Including draconic visage, d chains, d spears, d2h, d claws, d meds, d legs, d skirts... d bones, d hides :)?I want jagex to put resource dungeons and dungeoneering skill doors to dungeoneering floors so I can dungeon and get dungeoneering xp while I dg so I don't have to dg to get dg exp, but I can dg while I dg :)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColAvanor Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 I like the font, or at least the capital A. Those glassy curves in the middle look groovy, but the straight ones have jagged edges. The lineart is, IMO, too little. Either remove or add more. Hard to read the "fragile handle with care part". Perhaps more lineart around it? 8/10 liking it. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted September 26, 2004 Author Share Posted September 26, 2004 Thanks for the comments, keep 'em coming. :) Ok, I made the text a little bigger, though I want it to be a somewhat small just for the look. Since I'm not that good at line art, I decided to just remove it until I can make some that's better. "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korla Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 i like it, great sense of depth in it. dunno what to change, i can only say what i think is good, since i've never made an abstract sig in my life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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