Well, I just got finished making this. The render was in Bryce and I touched it up in Photoshop.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My first question is this: should I use this as my new sig?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secondly, I'd like some good C/C on it. Tell me what I did well, what needs work, what looks cool, and what sucks. I know the line art could use some work, but I've never been very good at that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Astra

7/10, the text could be improved a little.

I like the shapes. Text on down left looks too blurry.

 

 

 

Great sig, you should use it. :)

I like the font, or at least the capital A. Those glassy curves in the middle look groovy, but the straight ones have jagged edges. The lineart is, IMO, too little. Either remove or add more. Hard to read the "fragile handle with care part". Perhaps more lineart around it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 liking it. :wink:

Thanks for the comments, keep 'em coming. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, I made the text a little bigger, though I want it to be a somewhat small just for the look. Since I'm not that good at line art, I decided to just remove it until I can make some that's better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i like it, great sense of depth in it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dunno what to change, i can only say what i think is good, since i've never made an abstract sig in my life.