November 9, 200619 yr well, I am doing this for someone on RSC, and it is coming along nicely, I am nealy finished, I meant to post here sooner..but I...didnt :oops: ...Aways, C/C and what not...here it is :) one of my bests :) eh, and just for laughs....another recent peice...
November 10, 200619 yr Author you know..the veiw to post ratio seems a bit off :( ..anyways at least people are looing, and thanks for the comment viktor :)
November 10, 200619 yr you know..the veiw to post ratio seems a bit off :( ..anyways at least people are looing, and thanks for the comment viktor :) I'll look at yours if you look at mine :wink: Anyways, it looks good but the anatomy is off, even for a cartoon IMO. The guy with the santa hat and whip in the BG has a few anatomy issues. First off, even with the crest on the oversize gauntlet (not quite sure what that's called) you shading makes it look like the shoulder in the gauntlet is much higher and larger than the other one. Also, his torso especially on our right side looks like paper. There should be no empty space between the torso and his arm, it's all at least some part of his body. The way you have it now it looks like he's a paper cutout :shock:. The guy with the red party hat in the FG and the guy with the green party hat in the BG have no elbows. :-k The red phat guy also has a wierd face because, with the way you've drawn his nose, it looks like he's facing way off of where I would expect his actual attention to be at. In summary, the yellow circles are anatomy problems (no joints etc.) The red circles and arrows show the way different parts of the characters bodies appear to be pointing as I see it. Lots of the time these positions apper akward at best to me, contortionist at worst.
November 10, 200619 yr Author you know..the veiw to post ratio seems a bit off :( ..anyways at least people are looing, and thanks for the comment viktor :) I'll look at yours if you look at mine :wink: Anyways, it looks good but the anatomy is off, even for a cartoon IMO. The guy with the santa hat and whip in the BG has a few anatomy issues. First off, even with the crest on the oversize gauntlet (not quite sure what that's called) you shading makes it look like the shoulder in the gauntlet is much higher and larger than the other one. Also, his torso especially on our right side looks like paper. There should be no empty space between the torso and his arm, it's all at least some part of his body. The way you have it now it looks like he's a paper cutout :shock:. The guy with the red party hat in the FG and the guy with the green party hat in the BG have no elbows. :-k The red phat guy also has a wierd face because, with the way you've drawn his nose, it looks like he's facing way off of where I would expect his actual attention to be at. In summary, the yellow circles are anatomy problems (no joints etc.) The red circles and arrows show the way different parts of the characters bodies appear to be pointing as I see it. Lots of the time these positions apper akward at best to me, contortionist at worst. a very nice C/C, I tryed on anatomy, but i sketched then over layed with pixle..I am not very proffiecent at this, but I am leanring, thank you for the C/C and if you are expecting a C/C like that form me...tough :P
November 10, 200619 yr Congratz on making the 1000th ahrim barraging sig, Have a cookie :D Anyways, the first sig looks pretty cool Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die
November 10, 200619 yr Author Congratz on making the 1000th ahrim barraging sig, Have a cookie :D Anyways, the first sig looks pretty cool yeah I know the 2nd is cliche, but I dont really care :P ......and that cookie better not be oatmeal raison : .........and its not barragsing...bursting duh :P ... :P
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