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It was an ordinary day in Fallador, As _________ had been having a party after he got 99 construction. They were having fun, Playing around with everything in _________'s house. Everyone suddenly went to the combat ring for the party. __________ had decided to go so he teleported to Fallador out of the ring, When suddenly he looked over and seen someone with a Blue Party-Hat, So he went to see his username, Only to find the "Attack" option. So he decided to attack this person, This person was defenceless. Because he could not defend him self without the "Attack" option. So he kills the guy, And takes his Blue Party-Hat, So he decides to tell a friend who was also at the party, And then all of a sudden everyone at the party knew about this, People had their "Ancients Magics", And best weapons killing people around Fallador and Edgeville, Geting alot of loot, And leaving people wondering "What the hell just happened?" as they lost their Rares and Valuables as these people were "Gods". __________ and ___________ were banned for taking advantage of this bug. Jagex later found out that they had forgotten to make it so you couldent attack once you teleport out of the Combat Ring, But still never to this day have replaced the losses of the people who were brought down in "The Doomsday Masacre".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

VERSION 2

 

 

 

Well it's a nice day here in Fallador, I am High Alching some magic long bows to make some money. Me and some friends decided to get together to High Alch, So it wasnt as boring. So _________ brings out his Party-Hat and starts showing off to everyone and being the center of attention, SO me and some of our friends got our Valuables out to get some attention too. I looked over and seen a gaurd getting killed under ___________. He had been looking at music on his computer and we were being sarcastic saying "Oo youre going to die noob! lol" and so on, When suddenly I think to myself "A gaurd doesent have that many Hp" and I watch ___________ drop dead, I thought "WTF?" when suddenly I was struck with "Ancients", And was defenceless, And anyone knows "When your hit with ancients, Your dead". But what was going on, I tried to run to the bank, But I wasnt able to move, Because i was struck by "Ancients". I clicked on the username of the person killing me and it said ___________, Then before I knew it "Oh Dear, Your dead". I reported it to Customer Support, To find a few hours later they started to take action, I logged on the next day to find nothing replaced in my account. So I sent a request in, And not to this day have my, Nor my friends items been replaced...........

Please post your comments, I will be editing this to make it alot better. Also if you were in anyway involved in this, Please post below, And possibly share your stories and they may be added to some of this story..........

I was not in the slightest way effected and this really isn't that interesting. People lost items. That was it. They got killed because of luck or unlucky timing. Jagex is not goign to replace items that it has no reason to, so the people lost them, they are unhappy, so what? Items can be got back. It takes alot of time and skill to find a bug, and even more time and skill to get the items in the first place. Jagex is not infallible. I myself always carry a glory at least, if not an ectophial. It really is only player's own faults that they died. It was unlucky thats all. As far as I can see this is just a story about someone that is unhappy that they didn't get back something for acting in a stupid and unthoughtfull way. If you are going to wear a phat then you have a way of getting away, you don't just walk about. If you are getting attacked and cant attack back you turn retaliate on. You are saying that no one in the whole group though I know lets tele out before I die...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really have no sympathy for them. If it had happened to me you just get on with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Apart from that it was ok. Needs expanding on though. At the moment it is a fairly basic story. The descripion is really weak and the plot is based on something that really is only described as a killing spree. Killing sprees never have much of a good story behind them because they are so random.

I was not in the slightest way effected and this really isn't that interesting. People lost items. That was it. They got killed because of luck or unlucky timing. Jagex is not goign to replace items that it has no reason to, so the people lost them, they are unhappy, so what? Items can be got back. It takes alot of time and skill to find a bug, and even more time and skill to get the items in the first place. Jagex is not infallible. I myself always carry a glory at least, if not an ectophial. It really is only player's own faults that they died. It was unlucky thats all. As far as I can see this is just a story about someone that is unhappy that they didn't get back something for acting in a stupid and unthoughtfull way. If you are going to wear a phat then you have a way of getting away, you don't just walk about. If you are getting attacked and cant attack back you turn retaliate on. You are saying that no one in the whole group though I know lets tele out before I die...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really have no sympathy for them. If it had happened to me you just get on with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Apart from that it was ok. Needs expanding on though. At the moment it is a fairly basic story. The descripion is really weak and the plot is based on something that really is only described as a killing spree. Killing sprees never have much of a good story behind them because they are so random.

 

 

 

-It was JaGEx' fault.......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-And it took ________ about 10 minutes to find the bug (Once he teleported out of the ring, He all of a sudden noticed he could attack).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-And as I said above, I am going to be making a big edit, This is pretty much what it's going to be about.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-I am also planning to make a video for this and post it on Youtube.

I'd really have to agree with archi on some subjects. Your story was dull and did not catch the reader's attention. Make it more exciting by extending some paragraphs and adding lines like 'it was totally unexpected' or 'innocents dropped like flies'. Spice it up, ya know.

I'd really have to agree with archi on some subjects. Your story was dull and did not catch the reader's attention. Make it more exciting by extending some paragraphs and adding lines like 'it was totally unexpected' or 'innocents dropped like flies'. Spice it up, ya know.

 

 

 

Ok, Thanks for all the advice, Ill work on making it alot better/exciting.

**ACTUAL VIDEOS OF 6/6/6 "The Doomsday Masacre"**

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Directed By:

 

 

 

-RockRook

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Recorded By:

 

 

 

-S Y N I

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And Staring:

 

 

 

-Durial321

 

 

 

-Cursed You

 

 

 

-Munk1313

 

 

 

-Heritagechick

 

 

 

-Skyline210

 

 

 

-And Many More!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hosted By:

 

 

 

-S Y N I

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clearity Editing By:

 

 

 

-Tylersk8shop

 

 

 

-S Y N I

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hosted On:

 

 

 

http://www.Youtube.com

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To Watch The Video Click The Link Below:

 

 

 

http://youtube.com/watch?v=QRkH6xntctY

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Note:

 

 

 

I did not record this so I am not responsible for any names being mentioned.

You are as gulity as anyone, by broadcasting a video that shows names it is very clear that you have not tried to edit them out. If you had tried and said "I am not responsible for any of the names that I have missed" then that would have been acceptable...Although I sense that you do not care.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was no Jagex's fault any more than it is your fault for stepping on a snail, or for spilling a drink. It was an accident, it happens.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A video? How are you to do that, a animation(Draw yourself) or a cut and paste?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Apart from that it was ok./quote]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry to bring you down, but I think it was awful. No offence meant here but it reads like you spent five minutes on it. There is pretty much no description, flow sucks, characters need names, I don't feel for them. Paragraphing is terrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep working on it though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Apart from that it was ok./quote]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry to bring you down, but I think it was awful. No offence meant here but it reads like you spent five minutes on it. There is pretty much no description, flow sucks, characters need names, I don't feel for them. Paragraphing is terrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep working on it though.

 

 

 

Can't give the characters names, It's based on a true story, And i can't get the permission from them to put their names in cause theyn are banned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And archi- I didnt tape this, However it was Jagex' fault cause they frogot to make it so you couldent attack when you telied out,

Still you are promoting it so it is your fault.

 

 

 

You can't be perfect all the time. Jagex made a mistake...so what?