And I pull the strings...

[Buckeyemange]

The wars of Runescape, the battles there are,

 

 

 

The battles that take place here and far,

 

 

 

The Generals who do these things,

 

 

 

They are all puppets, and I pull the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have done this before, as my one poem said,

 

 

 

A berserk warrior who ended up dead,

 

 

 

He was controlled when he did these things,

 

 

 

He was a puppet, and I pulled the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The spells of the wise, the blades of the strong

 

 

 

It is I who makes them do the things called "Wrong,"

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, I do these things,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, I pull the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Evil bob, Iban, and the Gods of old,

 

 

 

I have heard their stories told,

 

 

 

They are nothing compared to me,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, and I pull the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

They live there lives, and I watch and enjoy,

 

 

 

They are all but my toys,

 

 

 

They live their lives, they dance for me,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, their lives I see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, master of all,

 

 

 

The People, the Places, the Spring and the Fall,

 

 

 

All life in Runescape, I control these things,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, and I pull the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

They think that they live their lives, by their own will,

 

 

 

But it is I makes them do things, who makes them kill,

 

 

 

I control the warriors, the wizards, the Kings,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, and I pull the strings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And I leave you here, and give you this fear,

 

 

 

I will come for Runescape, the end is near,

 

 

 

And when the world ends, I'll end all things,

 

 

 

I am the puppetmaster, and I'll cut the strings.

[Justin742]

Whoa...thats very good. Haven't seen a poem that good in a long while.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Congratulations!

[issy2]

Wow, love this!!! It's really, really good! I think the repetition works really well, maybe work on rhythm in the first few verses, but you've done a great job with rhyme and words. Nice!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

=D>

[Buckeyemange]

Thanks guys!

[archimage_a]

It is not the best I have ever read but it is quite good.

 

 

 

There is no real driving force behind the poem and is more of something that you would hear if you stood outside God's door and easdropped.

 

 

 

I did think it was a very unique view point though. 2 thumbs.