1st ever pixel [wip]

[jamie123]

this is the first time i have ever took time in paint to make a good looking image, so please be dont flameme, because i am a beginer, i have made a few fakes which i am better at so please rate this pixel /10. Any advise would be nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[cadburys_egg]

Please don't say you are claiming that linework as your own. -.-

 

 

 

I know that it's PJB's.

[badphooeybad]

Maybe she's saying rate her shading? But ya thats PJB's.

[jamie123]

ya i got it from another thread im not trying 2 steal it just shading it in, as im new to pixel art i just started of shading 2 begin with.

[badphooeybad]

Told ya so Cad. \ Anyways... I think it looks good for what little bit you have shaded.

[imhomer]

Good job but blue is a darker color than the purple/pink you have in the sky. The sky is lighter (pink) near the sun and the ground than higher in the sky where it's darker (blue/purple).

[cadburys_egg]

Told ya so Cad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I never said he wasn't, but I was hoping he wasn't going to take the credit for the linework aswell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But at the moment the sky colour is really off. It goes too quickly to a blue and should be the other way around.

[jamie123]

thx 4 advise, and i realize now that it shuld have been darker at top :wall:

[pjb21]

i was looking at the tree and thought to myself, hmm, im sure ive done a tree like that recently, i looked down the post and remember it was my linework :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

colourwise i suggest you keep to the lower half of the colour pallete, the greyer section, bright colours are foten sickening and, well just try not to use them to much.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the grass doesnt look very grass-like, dunno how you could improve tho, im no good at texturing myself ><

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[OFFTOPIC]just wondering what made you know it was my linework? the style or you'd seen me post it before?[/OFFTOPIC]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21