His eyes are a bit shifty, and his hands look a bit off. Fix his feet because they make the person look like he is floating, feet are usually flat on the ground -.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Off-topic: You're very talented at the piano, the song you played sounds a lot like the original one.

His eyes are a bit shifty, and his hands look a bit off. Fix his feet because they make the person look like he is floating, feet are usually flat on the ground -.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Off-topic: You're very talented at the piano, the song you played sounds a lot like the original one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks :D I was playing on my keyboard as the song played.

 

 

 

I will try to make his feet fit well , that or make him floating :?

 

 

 

I will try take all the advice and I'll be updating when Im done.

It all looks good but...what is he doing anyways, lol.

It all looks good but...what is he doing anyways, lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm starting to do a Hunting Fireworks scene now :D Here's a start, small updates, keep the C/C and rates coming :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit : whoopps

 

 

 

didnt notice the second page

 

 

 

nvm

 

 

 

just delete this reply

 

 

 

edit again : on topic : i cant seem to find where the shading begins lol

 

 

 

so i zoomed in and i have the following to say....

 

 

 

u have used the shades which are too close

 

 

 

the shades are too simliar

edit : whoopps

 

 

 

didnt notice the second page

 

 

 

nvm

 

 

 

just delete this reply

 

 

 

edit again : on topic : i cant seem to find where the shading begins lol

 

 

 

so i zoomed in and i have the following to say....

 

 

 

u have used the shades which are too close

 

 

 

the shades are too simliar

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks, I'll try to fix it later, Keep the ratings coming :D