December 18, 200619 yr Ok I am gonna be completely honest and say what I think...It wasn't great. My version, (In my opinion) was much better. If I do manage to find a few spare hours then I might finish my version and post it here. In case anyone was wondering Luke is slightly based on me, only slightly though. Also alot of the characters are based slightly on people I know(I actually got their concent, can you believe?) Anyway must be getting on. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
December 19, 200619 yr It was ok. It's not really my type of story though. Extremely good language though for a 12 year old, as said on MSN :P But as said above, just not my type of story I enjoy.
December 24, 200619 yr Ooops... ust posted on my bro'saccount. Sorry lol, it automatically logged him on to his account, this is his laptop. #-o I don't know what it is, but something keeps telling me you "own"?"When you're happy it's like you're a bird; you can fly. The only trouble is, you need other birds to fly with"
December 24, 200619 yr Author Ok I am gonna be completely honest and say what I think...It wasn't great. My version, (In my opinion) was much better. If I do manage to find a few spare hours then I might finish my version and post it here. If you were not comparing it to yours, what would you think? Because personally I felt very positive about it, especially the beginning. I think it started off well and gradually got worse... and I don't like your storyline either. (No offence,I think it would be cool if you posted your own version with the same title.
December 24, 200619 yr Aye Madam... Coming soon, another really good story... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
December 26, 200619 yr Well posted mine, Loveship, is currently 2 down from this one... http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=589715 I think people like to click on it, go "Hmmm this looks a bit long" and look at something else... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
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