Ye Olde Pencil and Paper Sketch

[Mazurizi]

[reddawn509]

Alright, I guess, but there are multiple things I can point out....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Anatomy- this is a huge problem for like...everyone :x , look at anatomy books, or guides online, that will help you get a basic idea of human anatomy.

 

 

 

-Anatomy in detail- the arms, they look more like sausages rather than arms. Try adding more shape, by adding muscles, and elbows. There is no muscle defination currently, which makes the character look like he is wearing a shirt under the armor, which assuming you followed the usual guidelines of veracs, is not so. The hand holding the whip, it does not look like they character if actually holding it, more like clenching it between his thumb and his index finger. ill do a quick sketch of how I would have draw it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now this is far from perfect, but it should give you a basic idea of how to draw it....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Shading- there is none of it in this picture, if you do not like shading with colored pencil, you can always shade with a normal pencil, using different pressures on the paper, you will get different shades, which is good for shading practice. Or, you can just practice shading with colored pencils..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats all my C/C for now, good luck :)

[runemetsa]

Shield is very nice, but the character itself is bit off. Train your anatomy and you will be better.

[Mazurizi]

Thanks for the CC.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, I didn't add any muscle definition and I didn't add any Shading. I'll mess it up if I try shading it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll take a look at some Tutorials, thanks.

[assassin_696]

Oh man, that's how I draw people (okay slightly better), surely you can do better than me? :P