Unless you're trying to make it very abstract, then it's really disproportionate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The lips are slanted too much

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The eyes are just...maybe to close inward, it's so huge there's no room left for her left eye. Just because her hair is covering half her face, you should still be able to see some of her left eye.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-The nose is too high

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Ear is too low.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was just pointing out some things. The perspective of the girl is difficult, and i'm no master at perspective so i'm just pointing out the things that look odd. Keep up the great work though! I'm sure it's gonna look great when you're done. =)

this is how i do har on animals, people, whatever. you can modify the strokes to get different styles of hair. next to the hair on the left side are 5 different coloured circles, the top being the lightest, the bottom the darkest. these were the colours i used for the part of the hair i re coloured/did.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i started by choosing the middle colour and making all the hair that colour, as a base. then i selected the second lightest colour, and added highlights, with a bigger range than normal, then use the lightest colour and add it in the middle of these 'highlighted' bits, enhancing it even more. then, add the 4th colour, the second darkest, in areas where the base colour is plentyful (where there are shadows etc) and use the darkest as only a few strokes, to show some depth. zoom in and youll see.