Jlr Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Here it is, leave some c/c please. Thanks Jlr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle85 Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Well other than the fact that the text is a little tough to read I think it looks pretty alright. Maybe add alittle more color to that big black spot on the right side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Link91 Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 looks alright.... not ur best tho looks like a pewrson is in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PArocking Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 i see a wolf when i look at it but thats just me i like it though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PArocking Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 i see a wolf when i look at it but thats just me i like it though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 In my opinion, it just looks messy. There's too much going on, it lacks a focal point, and the text is hard to read. On a more positive note, I like the colors, and the lighting isn't too bad. "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralinre Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 In my opinion, it just looks messy. There's too much going on, it lacks a focal point, and the text is hard to read. On a more positive note, I like the colors, and the lighting isn't too bad. "In so far as I am Man I am the chief of creatures. In so far as I am a man I am the chief of sinners." - G.K. Chesterton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goku20170 Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 Ive seen much much better work from you. The text is abit hard to read. It needs more shades of blue. More feeling in the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goku20170 Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 Ive seen much much better work from you. The text is abit hard to read. It needs more shades of blue. More feeling in the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jlr Posted October 19, 2004 Author Share Posted October 19, 2004 the text is meant to be harder to read because its meant to be kinda spooky and mysterious. The focal point is just center right where there is meant to be sort of a cavish spooky night feel. Thanks for some of the c/c Jlr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jlr Posted October 19, 2004 Author Share Posted October 19, 2004 the text is meant to be harder to read because its meant to be kinda spooky and mysterious. The focal point is just center right where there is meant to be sort of a cavish spooky night feel. Thanks for some of the c/c Jlr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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