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only a landscape right now, but ay' u gotta start some where.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

constructive critism aloud, otherwise keep ur yap shut.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moosh

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT) anyone wana help me make a ground?

 

 

 

Shading on rocks is awesome.. Not sure about the colours though.. And the grass isn't very good.

Shading on rocks is awesome.. Not sure about the colours though.. And the grass isn't very good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :D . i was thinking them rocks would get flamed, cuase not many people have seen them purple, but trust me they r out there. but i had not clue how to do the grass :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

Shading on rocks is awesome.. Not sure about the colours though.. And the grass isn't very good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is the type of critism thats good, tells me what my flaws with out "jeeze them rocks really suck" he told me what sucked about them, then told me what was good, so i didnt have to waist my time on the wrong thing. I hope to see more posts like this to help out my sig making.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moosh

Lol. Thats called constructive critisim.. Tell them the good things. then the things that need some work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i tried the ground over, and added my first pixel guy, tried to make the armour look dinged up :? .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

erm... the water looks fake... try making it look better, 'cos now it looks as if it has ANOTHER different light source from the rocks, which just dont really make sense...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the guy is too thin, fatten him up a lil and again, define the light source... and try not to make his armour make 'dinged up' unless u have a dead body beside him to show that he just came from a fight...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh, and did i mention the grass look so fake? even a person from 10million metres away can see that its fake :P improve on it, or just put in a smooth lawn and get a defined light source...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6/10 as it's ur 1st pixel :wink:

erm... the water looks fake... try making it look better, 'cos now it looks as if it has ANOTHER different light source from the rocks, which just dont really make sense...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the guy is too thin, fatten him up a lil and again, define the light source... and try not to make his armour make 'dinged up' unless u have a dead body beside him to show that he just came from a fight...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh, and did i mention the grass look so fake? even a person from 10million metres away can see that its fake :P improve on it, or just put in a smooth lawn and get a defined light source...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6/10 as it's ur 1st pixel :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i knew there was something wrong with the water, it looked fake to me to, but i didnt know how to fix it. thanks for the constructive critism.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

the background is good. Except for the square sun. But i think the gey in full rune is amazingly bad. sorry

 

 

 

heres un update on the grass and water, not quiet done with the right side of the lawn...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yea and the sun was the very first thing i did, adn this is my first pixel, so... yea ill fix that to. thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

is that supposed to be a river or the ocean? You might wanna clear that up a bit. And the guy needs a lot of work.

GOOD THINGS:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Water: Looks very good, it looks a lot like waves! I think you should try adding a beach. And maybe some dolphins or something if you get bored :D

 

 

 

The Sun: I like where it's positioned, but you gotta make your other things shaded as it were where it is. I like it though.

 

 

 

SHADING on the Rock: I don't like the color...they may be out there, but so are big hairy terds in my toilet, you don't see them in my sig :wink: . Make the rock grey man :roll: , maybe put some moss on it, that would look cool.

 

 

 

The Sky: I like it, the way it shades near the sun. But over on the right side, it's shaded a completely different style, horizontally rather than at a 90 degree angle off the sun. Fix that :x . The color is also good, it's not too bright, not too dull.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The Guy: Scrap it completely and start over! He looks like a shrivled up raisen. Put him at an angle, and make his arms the same length, also give him a weapon, he looks stupid with nothing. Try again and again until you got it right!

 

 

 

The Ground: Make blades of grass throughout the whole thing, don't just shade, grass isn't flat!

 

 

 

More Objects: Put things like: Birds, dead animal skulls, pebbles, rats, etc.

GOOD THINGS:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Water: Looks very good, it looks a lot like waves! I think you should try adding a beach. And maybe some dolphins or something if you get bored :D

 

 

 

The Sun: I like where it's positioned, but you gotta make your other things shaded as it were where it is. I like it though.

 

 

 

SHADING on the Rock: I don't like the color...they may be out there, but so are big hairy terds in my toilet, you don't see them in my sig :wink: . Make the rock grey man :roll: , maybe put some moss on it, that would look cool.

 

 

 

The Sky: I like it, the way it shades near the sun. But over on the right side, it's shaded a completely different style, horizontally rather than at a 90 degree angle off the sun. Fix that :x . The color is also good, it's not too bright, not too dull.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BAD THINGS:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Guy: Scrap it completely and start over! He looks like a shrivled up raisen. Put him at an angle, and make his arms the same length, also give him a weapon, he looks stupid with nothing. Try again and again until you got it right!

 

 

 

The Ground: Make blades of grass throughout the whole thing, don't just shade, grass isn't flat!

 

 

 

More Objects: Put things like: Birds, dead animal skulls, pebbles, rats, etc.

 

 

 

i was thinking about adding a beach, and maybe a boat. but that dolphin idea is good. thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

 

 

 

fixed the right side of sky, and changed color of mountians :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh

the collors cood look more realistic and the guy isnt verry good but for your first then whetever add more detail to the backround like trees or stuff in the grass the moutain is alout of detail thow

 

 

 

add a tree or somthing nice shading thow i cant do shading i always mess up do u have a program

 

 

 

the collors cood look more realistic and the guy isnt verry good but for your first then whetever add more detail to the backround like trees or stuff in the grass the moutain is alout of detail thow

 

 

 

add a tree or somthing nice shading thow i cant do shading i always mess up do u have a program

 

 

 

 

 

 

yea i have microsoft paint.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

moosh