snfrosty247 Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 WIP, flame on, I can only get better through CC, I will be working on it later on and add colors, more lines and shading, I just want some flaws pointed out before I continue NOTE: MY LINES ARE BOLD, I WILL CLEAN THE EDGES AFTER I'M DONE WITH THE LINEWORK. I prefer scribble lines in a pencil style rather than straight dot by dot, recreating a totally new style. 1. Hoping to get into pixel art. EDIT: Thanks For the CC. To do- clean the lines, fix the deform spots, add an enviorment, then *sigh* color and shade. ^Thanks Weeboab for the awesome sig!I know the 'How to Make Tiny Carrots' (or HTMTC, as it is known among the elite pixelart circles) is in high demand. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I would work on anatomy, if your going for a cartoony style I would still fix the shape of the arm muscles. Theres pic's on google that can help :P I would lower the shirt sleeve near the hand near the maul and add the thumb :) Also, I think the granite maul should be actually over his shoulder as a rest. Good Luck :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snfrosty247 Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 I would work on anatomy, if your going for a cartoony style I would still fix the shape of the arm muscles. Theres pic's on google that can help :P I would lower the shirt sleeve near the hand near the maul and add the thumb :) Also, I think the granite maul should be actually over his shoulder as a rest. Good Luck :P My exact thought on the arm, also, I realised I screwed up on the maul. :-# ^Thanks Weeboab for the awesome sig!I know the 'How to Make Tiny Carrots' (or HTMTC, as it is known among the elite pixelart circles) is in high demand. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snfrosty247 Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 Updated, look better? Tried to apply your CC. ^Thanks Weeboab for the awesome sig!I know the 'How to Make Tiny Carrots' (or HTMTC, as it is known among the elite pixelart circles) is in high demand. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darrel104 Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 he looks a bit too thin mainly in the chest/abdominal area Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snfrosty247 Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 he looks a bit too thin mainly in the chest/abdominal area I instinctively give my charectors sucked out stomachs, so I'll need help from other people to tell me if it looks natural or not, so I will defenately fix. :-# ^Thanks Weeboab for the awesome sig!I know the 'How to Make Tiny Carrots' (or HTMTC, as it is known among the elite pixelart circles) is in high demand. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinslayer777 Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 Recositer your spelling, reconsider... But I like it, especially for a first. His back looks a little curved outward ), but I'm not sure that's logically intended (big hammer weigh him backwards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris11 Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 Pretty good, only one thing to say though: I think the eyes look a lil' funny. Maybe its just me, but they kinda look wierd. Im not sure they're lined up with each other, and they dont look the same size. Other wise, nice one. Got 99 range? Love PKing, God Wars and other events? Then join Team Fatal, a 99 range group!Forums: http://z3.invisionfree.com/Team_Fatal/index.php? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snfrosty247 Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 Pretty good, only one thing to say though: I think the eyes look a lil' funny. Maybe its just me, but they kinda look wierd. Im not sure they're lined up with each other, and they dont look the same size. Other wise, nice one. I like my eyes, but yeah I can see crookedness. ^Thanks Weeboab for the awesome sig!I know the 'How to Make Tiny Carrots' (or HTMTC, as it is known among the elite pixelart circles) is in high demand. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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