Windslinger Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 Well i've been working on my artwork for a bit, but i haven't actually posted one, and this is the first pixel i've ever done. Also about the persons hair, i picked a totaly random color since i coulndt decide Things for me to do that i already know: Dithering AA Dragonish thingy I've been looking at CC on other peoples sigs, and i've learned alot of terms, and ways i can improve etc. but i really need CC for my own sig.. anyhow. Also, the dragonish thing, im definetly changing EDIT:I forgot, i didn't do the feet yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 The guy's anatomy is a little funky, and his legs are quite skinny. his feet are a quite small also. the shading on the land doesn't have to range in color so much, if the ground looked like that, the earth would be a very small sphere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 the dragon should be under the water. both the player and the dragon need a shadow. get an anatomy book or look on deviant art / google to learn about anatomy. whats that sand thing off in the distance ? also shading on the character is minnimum try some tuts or even better sign up to my pxiling school as there are very expereinced teachers and judges (terly mgdh faelenof junction etc.) Its a very good school :P (You can never advertise too much!) Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windslinger Posted January 20, 2007 Author Share Posted January 20, 2007 Thanks for CC, also can anyone say some good things, just so i know i did atleast SOMETHING right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 The guy's anatomy is a little funky, and his legs are quite skinny. his feet are a quite small also. the shading on the land doesn't have to range in color so much, if the ground looked like that, the earth would be a very small sphere. no-offence but skinny? look whos talking (glances at smapla's sig) Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 Thanks for CC, also can anyone say some good things, just so i know i did atleast SOMETHING right umm you should check lots of tuts right here Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 no-offence but skinny? look whos talking (glances at smapla's sig) Sorry, I didn't realize that just because most of the population is overweight that I had to translate that into my art. Just because someone might be a glutton doesn't mean that everyone who is skinny is wrong to draw people skinny. Just curious, why are we talking so 'quietly'? Are you trying to hide your insults from the average forum goer? did you perhaps think that only people who you directed comments at would bother to read your extremely small font? It's a very pathetic thing, if you ask me. The dragon thing looks interesting, but it's hard to see under the yellow bits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 no-offence but skinny? look whos talking (glances at smapla's sig) Sorry, I didn't realize that just because most of the population is overweight that I had to translate that into my art. Just because someone might be a glutton doesn't mean that everyone who is skinny is wrong to draw people skinny. Just curious, why are we talking so 'quietly'? Are you trying to hide your insults from the average forum goer? did you perhaps think that only people who you directed comments at would bother to read your extremely small font? It's a very pathetic thing, if you ask me. The dragon thing looks interesting, but it's hard to see under the yellow bits. ok sorry lets be sensible and not start a flame war Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 no problem, hey, it's hard to draw fat people when you can fit a kryptonite rigid bicycle lock around your waist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windslinger Posted January 20, 2007 Author Share Posted January 20, 2007 no problem, hey, it's hard to draw fat people when you can fit a kryptonite rigid bicycle lock around your waist. k then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 no problem, hey, it's hard to draw fat people when you can fit a kryptonite rigid bicycle lock around your waist. k then... Yes? it appears you have something to say, or are just rambling =) So, how are those feet coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windslinger Posted January 20, 2007 Author Share Posted January 20, 2007 ... rambling... wierd... im listening to the led zep song ramble on ... anyhow pretty well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darrel104 Posted January 20, 2007 Share Posted January 20, 2007 -you should put work into getting line work right before you color it -guy would fall if he was in that pose > most likely would have bent knees -lantern emitting light isn't visible at day -the dock doesn't have a z dimension/ 3d look(looks flat and they are usually made of planks) -look at a reference pic for the dock -perspective is wrong on lantern(you drew it from a straight on approach) -dragon just looks like its floating -change black lines to a color less noticeable -no idea what the brownish gray thing in the water is -usually brown land masses don't exist since stuff usually grows on dirt/ you need to make it a light brown for a beach color -vanishing point is curved, should be straight unless the person is on a really small planet. -sun's light seems to be focused to the left, should be divided evenly -should shade the person/add more contrast to him hope that c/c helps you a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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