heres my newest sig lookin to sell it seeing if bdvo wants it.... its only my like 4th attempt at a sig so i think its pretty good

 

 

 

note** its not all the way done gotta touch up a few things and finsh the sky

 

 

 

hehe its ok i like th style you make your sigs but the guy dead on the floor looks messed up

hehe its ok i like th style you make your sigs but the guy dead on the floor looks messed up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i tryed to have him looked a lil twisted up because he got bopped so hard by the rune guy

any body else cunsrtuctive crititsisime always welcome

All i'd say is change the colour of your rune to a more cyany colour. And try and put some perspective into your drawing, right now it looks a little flat.

blazer wu tdo u mean by perspective?

like add more depth my using more shades of colors like on the pile that guy's laying on make it light at the bottom and make it work itself up to dark and then a thin line of light at the top to make it have depth

o ok

is it just me or is that sword on ground a lil odd? :lol:

is it just me or is that sword on ground a lil odd? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its not u... the sword DOES look odd :?

 

is it just me or is that sword on ground a lil odd? :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its not u... the sword DOES look odd :?

More like a tongue then a sword.

The Green Guy looks like some 40's dancer doing a shuffle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Rune Guy is a bit better, but go for more of a rune color.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6/10! :D

The guy lying on the ground looks like he had a major bladder problem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The text is really bad.

 

 

 

The shading and details are really plain, and the shapes look all crumpled.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry, but its not very good in my opinion. But its a start :)

At the moment the armour doesn't look all that protective on the standing person. Try for a smoother, more solid shape to it, as plate mail doesn't really follow the contours of someone's skin. The shoulder protectors should appear to protect more from above than from in front, and, as a rule, the armour in general should have a lot more emphasis on the left (traditionally the side which is more likely to be struck).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If realism isn't your thing, that's fine. I'm just a bit of a stickler for realism as far as armour is concerned.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, and try to remove the bit at the top of the helmet. Helmets are designed to make blows glance off, and the decoration above would be more likely to catch hits than anything else.

i havent looked at this pos tin awhile but i just saw it form lookin for sumtin else and the "decoration" on his helmet it suppose to be a halo u know "lets have a moment of silence" he suppose to be liek an angel typ eof thing ya haha i know....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway ive made a few more sigs and theve gotten way better

Thats not bad

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I give it a 8/10