Took me about an hour to make, with soem help from Segeness, Give me an honest rating please.

Why has it messed up again!

 

 

 

Blah..

 

 

 

:P

1. dont put special characters in the filename

 

 

 

2. your host doesnt allow hotlinking

Ty man, I got it fixed now

Sooo.. Anyone gunna rate it? it's my second pixel picture.

The zammy staff kinda looks like a fork XD

honest rate.... a 2.... im sry but i just think it looks terrible.

 

 

 

(u asked me 2 be honest)

first off, as you work on it save it as png so that you dont get distortion on the final as jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the colours overall look pretty good, maybe add some shading or texture?

 

 

 

you're right about the staff, maybe make it longer?

 

 

 

changing the font to something more interesting eg photoshopping something makes a big diff

 

 

 

it also kinda looks like ur standing on a pizza, or is that just me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

pretty good for second pic though :D

Thanks for the advise, and thanks for the pizza thing too, I see that now :D And thanks for your honest opinion other guy, I no its harsh but it's true.. Ill improve.

 

 

 

:D

 

 

 

Or mabye I can just be making him stand on the peporoni pizza of doom. :P

If i had a pixel program i would also try but i dont..My homest opinion I got hungry from looking at the pizza of doom....and u look albino not that its bad but im not shure if you wanted it like that...and make the staff longer it does look like a fork..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Honestly